研究生申請(qǐng)-personal-statement

1、我用來(lái)申請(qǐng)香港大學(xué)并成功的我用來(lái)申請(qǐng)香港大學(xué)并成功的PS來(lái)源：管羚雅◇娃娃BHSFer的日志【我這篇是比較長(zhǎng)，兩頁(yè)半，還是建議大家兩頁(yè)以內(nèi)甚至一頁(yè)半哈~僅供參考?！烤褪前l(fā)上來(lái)給大家看看，就當(dāng)攢人品、造福吧。恩覺得寫得好您就拿去看，覺得寫得不好就忽略我好啦。首先感謝多次幫助我的@張洋(231216758)，我愛死你=。=。是這樣，我申請(qǐng)了香港大學(xué)建筑院的城市規(guī)劃專業(yè)的授課式研究生，2年學(xué)制（MScinUrbanPlanning），而且我是

2、真心很想去這個(gè)專業(yè)。所以現(xiàn)在也算初步圓夢(mèng)了。（由于家庭原因等，我只申請(qǐng)了香港，有港大、港科技、港中文、港理工、港城市，都拿到offer。PS基本上都是一個(gè)思路，但是最后一段有更改，因?yàn)樽詈笠欢我话銓憽皐hyschool&whyprogram”，所以一定要根據(jù)每個(gè)學(xué)校所申請(qǐng)的不同program修改自己的文章。）我發(fā)我的PS，主要是給各位借鑒個(gè)思路。我的思路中，最主要的一方面就是：PS以一個(gè)主題為主線，然后PS中每一段都要多多少少提到該主題

3、，使文章成為一個(gè)整體。恩，我寫的肯定不是最好的，大牛多了去了。不過(guò)怎么說(shuō)呢，每個(gè)人申請(qǐng)的時(shí)候，PS都是挺難的一關(guān)，總是不知道怎么寫。所以，有了別人的PS看看，總是件好事。但我覺得，我能成功，還有很多其他因素。1、面試認(rèn)真準(zhǔn)備，面試后為了表達(dá)真心，發(fā)了Thankyouletter給課程主任；2、材料準(zhǔn)備全面，各種獎(jiǎng)狀、PS、CV、Ptfolio等；3、自己全面了解了該program，以及和申請(qǐng)HK有關(guān)的一切（上港大官網(wǎng)、寄托等網(wǎng)站），這樣

4、不論走到申請(qǐng)的哪個(gè)階段，我都心中有數(shù)，不會(huì)太慌張。反正說(shuō)白了，申請(qǐng)是自己的事情，我覺得想做就要做好，不然不如拉到。行吧不廢話了，上PS了。bytheplanningprocessasitwasthefirsttimethatIcouldindependentlyhletheprofessionaldesignwk.IgraspedappliedskillsofthesoftwareCelDRAWallbymyselfdrewrevise

5、ddraftsfmethantentimesduetodissatisfactionperfecteddetailscontinuallyduringthewholeprocessfinallyaccomplishedmydesignwhicheventuallywonmeahighmark.NotasinglewkinthisprojectwaseasybutIpulledthroughthemalljustasIdidsooften

6、inrunning.Meanwhilethisexperienceallowedmetofullyperceivethemofurbanplanningwhichgreatlydeepenedmyunderstingofthissubjectfurtherstrengthenedmydeterminationtocommittoit.AfterthatIwasalsoinvolvedincoursessuchasUrbanEnviron

7、mentAnalysisPlanningDesignofLResourcebuttheydidnotsatisfymythirstfknowledgepractice.DrivenbystrongacademicinitiativethisyearIassembledafivememberteamappliedfaresearchprojecttoinvestigatetheexistingproblemsofWuhanpublicto

8、iletsasimprovingthecurrentsituationwasespeciallymeaningfultosustainableplanningdevelopmentoftheplace.AtfirstwhenIwaspreparingmaterialsunexpectedtroubleoccurred.Therewashardlyanysupptdatawhichmeantthatweevencouldnotcarryo

9、utthemostbasicwk.Thoughfrustratedweexertedourselvesfsolutionsfinallyobtainedsomedatafromarelevantresearchduetomyteacher’shelp.What’smeafterabundantresearchesanalysesIdecidedtoimprovetheexistingmodeltoapplyittoourprojectw

10、hichwasproventobeeffective.Theneverythingwasontrack.Wemainlyfocusedonanalysinginsufficientnumberoftoiletsunsuitableproptionofmen’stowomen’sutilisingquantitativequalitativemethods.Equallyimptantwemadeseveralsuggestions.Ba

11、sedonfruitfulresearchresultsIasthefirstauthwrotethepaper“AnalysisoftheProblemsofPublicToiletsinWuhan”withmyteammates.LaterIamextremelyelatedthatthepaperhasbeenpublishedinanationalacademicjournalcalledMarketModernisation.

12、Overallthisexcitingexperiencehashighlypromotedmycriticalthinkingskills.Alsoithasbroughtmethefantasticfeelingofrunninginan“academicrace”accompaniedbychallengesfollowedbysuccess.LongingtoenrichmyexperienceinurbanplanningIs

13、entmycurriculumvitaetoXXXXthissummerobtainedapreciousinternshipopptunity.WkingasanassistantdesignerIjoinedalargescaleprojectcalled“XXXX”.AtfirstIfollowedmydirecttofamiliarisemyselfwiththeprojectthebasicskills.Thenafterma

14、kingeveryendeavtoenhancemyprofessionalabilityIwastrustedtoshouldermaintaskssuchasoverallplanningaswellasearlierstageprojectinvestigationsurvey.DuringtheinternshipIseizedeveryopptunitymadeattemptstoexperiencethelifeofarea

15、lplanner.ThepositivecommentsIreceivedfrommydirectcolleagueshavesignificantlysolidifiedmyaspirationofbecomingaplanner.（XXXX不寫出來(lái)了，有原因。）NeverthelessIhavealwayssoughtfcomprehensivepersonaldevelopmentinvariousaspects.Agirlwho

16、isoutgoingindependentwhoiscapableofleadershipwhoisversatileexcelsatElectricalganDrumSetisalwaysinthespotlight.DuringundergraduateperiodItookeverychancetogetmyselfexposedtovariousextracurricularactivities.Amongthemtheonet