2018高考英語應(yīng)用文寫作

1、應(yīng)用文寫作 ---基于結(jié)構(gòu)、內(nèi)容和語言的視角,紹興市第一中學 葉建映,寫作，除了運氣，我們能準備什么嗎？,假定你是李華，得知外教Mr. Hall寒假不回國，想邀請他到你家過春節(jié)。請給他寫一封信，內(nèi)容包括：1.時間；2.一同過節(jié)的家人；3.活動。注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右； 2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。,2017年11月浙江省高考應(yīng)用文,假定你是李華，計劃組織一次郊游，請給你的英國朋友Chri

2、s寫封郵件邀請他參加。內(nèi)容包括：1. 參加者；2. 時間、地點；3. 活動：登山、野餐等。 注意：1.詞數(shù)80字左右； 2. 可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。,2017年6月浙江省高考應(yīng)用文,假定你是李華。下學期你將作為交換生（exchange student）去加拿大一所高中學習，住在Lynn家里。請給Lynn寫一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1. 介紹自己:2. 告知到達時間：3. 詢問應(yīng)做何準備

3、.注意:1. 詞數(shù)80左右2. 可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。,2016年10月浙江省高考應(yīng)用文,1. 培養(yǎng)應(yīng)用文寫作邏輯思維。2. 熟悉應(yīng)用文篇章結(jié)構(gòu)特點。3. 牢記應(yīng)用文語言表達特點。4. 精選寫作題材與范文分析。,01,02,應(yīng)用文的評分原則、細節(jié)和樣文賞析,從結(jié)構(gòu)、內(nèi)容、語言的視角 應(yīng)對應(yīng)用文寫作,03,如何改進你的應(yīng)用文寫作,假定你是李華，計劃組織一次郊游，請給你的英國朋友Chris寫封

4、郵件邀請他參加。內(nèi)容包括：1. 參加者；2. 時間、地點；3. 活動：登山、野餐等。 注意：1.詞數(shù)80字左右； 2. 可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。,邀請信,2017年6月浙江省高考應(yīng)用文,一.應(yīng)用文的總評分原則與細節(jié),嚴謹?shù)男形慕Y(jié)構(gòu): 第一部分應(yīng)為問候語和寫信目的 第二部分main body 活動內(nèi)容

5、 第三部分表達對方應(yīng)邀的愿望完整的內(nèi)容、豐富的語言和句式詞數(shù)少于60或多于100,扣2分內(nèi)容要點遺漏，或篡改要點，降一檔標點符號大面積不規(guī)范,扣1-2分書寫較差,影響交際,可將分數(shù)降一檔格式不對,扣一分,（一）總評分原則應(yīng)用文的總分為15分, 這一次的均分去零分卷后為9.1。,（二）具體評分細節(jié),一. 應(yīng)用文的樣文賞析,Dear Chris, [I'm Li Hua and I&#

6、39;m writing to extend my earnest invitation for your participation in the outing organized by me.] Aiming to gain a better acquaintance with exotic culture, I have invited teenagers I know all over the world to get acti

7、vely involved in this event. For the sake of convenience, the outing falls in Hong Kong at 9 a.m, on July 6th. Brimful of intriguing activities like climbing and having a picnic, this outing is bound to be a huge suc

8、cess. A response at your earliest convenience will be highly appreciated!

9、 Yours, Li Hua,14 分,行文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰; 適當添加細節(jié)使內(nèi)容完整；語言表達能力強;詞匯和句式豐富;完全達到了預期的寫作目的,開頭段：自我介紹+寫信目的適當?shù)募毠?jié)添加：活動的目的、意義（第二句）,

10、中間段：活動內(nèi)容（語言表達地道、詞匯豐富、有理有據(jù)、行文流暢）,結(jié)尾段：表達愿望（恰當使用應(yīng)用文套話）,一. 應(yīng)用文的樣文賞析,Dear Chris, I'm Li Hua. I intend to organize a trip. I'll invite my friends who you'll get on well with. We will go to Huangshan nest Wedne

11、sday where we can visit beautiful natural views. Of course, the activities which are fantastic. For example, climbing the mountain and having a picnic. At the same time, we'll take photos in order to memory our trip.

12、 I believe if you join us, you’ll love the views from the bottom of your heart. I'm looking forward to traveling with you ! Yours,

13、 Li Hua,行文結(jié)構(gòu)比較完整，若寫信目的自成一段可使文章結(jié)構(gòu)一目了然；覆蓋了主要內(nèi)容;有些語言方面的錯誤,但不影響理解;整體而言,基本達到了預期的寫作目的;,8分,1. 應(yīng)用文的分類2. 應(yīng)用文的特點3. 應(yīng)用文寫作中存在的問題4. 解決的策略及實踐,二、應(yīng)用文寫作 ---基于結(jié)構(gòu)、內(nèi)容和語言的視角,,,失物招領(lǐng)尋物啟事倡議書請

14、假條告知函發(fā)言稿（演講稿、 致辭等）通知（書面、口頭）報道……,（一）、 應(yīng)用文的分類（ Classification ）,投訴信感謝信邀請信道歉信求助信求職信建議信推薦信申請信祝賀信詢問信,（二）、應(yīng)用文的特點,Clear in structure （結(jié)構(gòu)清晰）Substantial in content （內(nèi)容充實）Appr

15、opriate in language （語言得體）,（三）、應(yīng)用文寫作中存在的問題,1. 卷面不潔2. 文體不辨3. 格式不妥4. 結(jié)構(gòu)混亂5. 讀者不明,6. 要點不全7. 過度添加8. 語法錯誤9. 套語連篇10. 觀點缺乏,內(nèi)容,,完整性,格式,,規(guī)范性,語言,得體性,,,應(yīng)用文,問題分析,卷面不潔2. 文體不辨3. 格式不妥4. 結(jié)構(gòu)混亂,5. 要點不全6. 過度添加7. 觀點缺乏8. 語法錯

16、誤9. 套語連篇10. 觀點缺乏,,結(jié)構(gòu),,內(nèi)容,語言,,例1：,假定你是李明。你校邀請了英國伯明翰大學的Elliot Smith 教授來做關(guān)于莎士比亞生平的講座。請你作為主持人向參加講座的同學用英語介紹講座情況。內(nèi)容包括： 1.講座的教授和講座的內(nèi)容； 2.講座后有自由交流時間； 3.對教授的講座表示歡迎。 注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右； 2. 可適當增加細節(jié)

17、，以使行文連貫。 3.參考詞匯： 伯明翰大學：the University of Birmingham,主持稿,,例2：,假設(shè)你是淘寶店“Beauty& the Beast”的店主張林，因為給客戶李華發(fā)錯了兩件襯衫的尺碼和顏色，特向李華書面道歉，愿意提供換貨服務(wù)，并且打八折優(yōu)惠以彌補過失。內(nèi)容包括： 1. 自我介紹； 2. 誠懇道歉并說明原因； 3

18、. 愿意提供免郵費服務(wù)和八折優(yōu)惠； 4. 如果對方不同意換貨，退貨也可以。 注意：1. 詞數(shù)80左右； 2. 可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。,道歉信,,1. 卷面不潔，字跡不 清,,,,,,,解決對策： 每天一練，日見效果閱卷時的視覺疲勞,速度快，如卷面的不美觀，書寫差，有時對作文成績的影響不是1-2分，而是5-6分，所以要把書寫放到第一點強調(diào)。,行文結(jié)構(gòu),2. 文體不辨3. 格式不妥

19、4. 結(jié)構(gòu)混亂,,,2.文體不辨,稱呼,署名,3.格式不妥,,4. 結(jié)構(gòu)混亂,無分段,解決對策：仔細審題，明確格式 分分段落，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰,投訴信感謝信邀請信道歉信求助信求職信建議信推薦信申請信祝賀信詢問信請假條告知函倡議書,書信、郵件、假條等Dear XXX,(稱呼) Yours,(落款)

20、 XXX,失物招領(lǐng) (標題) Found (署名)尋物啟事 (標題) Lost (署名)書面通知 (標題) Notice (署名)出通知單位/個人

21、口頭通知 Ladies and gentlemen, /Boys and girls/……, may I have your attention please? 發(fā)言稿(演講稿\致辭) Ladies and gentlemen,/ Fellow students/Boys and girls/…… Thanks for your listening. 報道 (標題)

22、征文 （標題）Contribution Wanted,書信的結(jié)構(gòu),開頭段： （自我介紹） 背景介紹+寫信目的 I am Li Hua, a seventeen-year-old student (from … senior school). I have learned / been informed that … Now I am writing to app

23、ly for the position / express my gratitude…,中間段： 具體問題（主題句）+具體分析（拓展句） There are four main reasons that I am qualified for the job. Firstly,… Besides,… What’s more,… Additionally,… Here are some details fo

24、r the activity. I’d like you to know how much your … meant to me. I really find it extremely hard to do … Hopefully you could give me some suggestions. The following suggestions carried out, things w

25、ould probably become much better. I have been looking forward to doing… However, … I believe if you were I, you would make the same choice. I sincerely hope that you can accept my apologies and understand my situat

26、ion.,結(jié)尾段： 客套話 I would appreciate it if you can write me back as soon as possible. I would feel greatly honored if you …,(求職信),(邀請信),(感謝信),(求助信),(建議信),(道歉信),內(nèi)容完整,,5. 要點不全6. 過度添加7. 觀點缺乏,5. 要點不全,內(nèi)容包括：

27、1. 自我介紹； 2. 誠懇道歉并說明原因； 3. 愿意提供免郵費服務(wù)和八折優(yōu)惠； 4. 如果對方不同意換貨，退貨也可以。,,6. 過度添加,,,,We will gather at our school gate before 8. am, which is located on Chong Shi Road.,,,Please get to our school gate before 8:00 am, wh

28、ich may be pretty early for both teachers and students at weekend.,,,You may take a camera with you because I’m pretty sure that the awesome view on the top of the mountain will deeply impress you and you will have a str

29、ong desire to record it.,,,,學校發(fā)現(xiàn)最近經(jīng)常有學生違反學校規(guī)定，通過美團、餓了么等手機APP 訂購外賣。假設(shè)你是新華中學學生會主席李華，請你代表學生會擬一份書面通知 。重申禁令陳述禁令原因呼吁同學樣自覺遵守學校規(guī)定 be harmful to health break the school rules,7. 千篇一律，缺少獨到觀點,解決對策：相互探討，相互借鑒；

30、 仔細思索，考慮全面； 觀點深刻，見解獨特；,陳述禁令原因-----觀點收集：1.點外賣需要手機，將手機帶到學校來不僅會分散我們的學習注意力，還會造成其他的負面影響。To order takeout, you must take mobile phones into campus, which will distract our attention from stud

31、y, and exert other negative impact on students.2. 外賣的食品安全不能得到保障，而學校食品都是經(jīng)過權(quán)威部門檢測，可以放心食用。The safety of takeout can’t be guaranteed, while the food provided by our school canteens are healthy to eat, because it is inspect

32、ed by authorities.3. 點外賣不僅浪費時間還浪費金錢，因為學校的飯菜價格合理，口味多樣，品種豐富。It’s a waste of time and money to order takeout because school canteens provide food which is rich in tastes and variety.,4. 外賣往往盛放在塑料盒里，塑料很難降解，會對環(huán)境造成污染。Takeou

33、t is usually kept in plastic containers, which is hard to break down and does harm to the environment.送外賣的人員隨意進出校園,會給校園管理增加困難,對學生的安全也是一種潛在的危險.The fact that the delivery men of takeout enter our campus at will adds to t

34、he difficulty of our school management. Besides, it is a potential danger to the safety of students.,Notice Recently, some students have ordered fast food on APPs such as Meituan, Ele me. Their behaviors have violate

35、d the school rules so I’m here to restate the restriction that ordering takeout is banned. Delicious as fast food is, students will lose their balance of diets if they take long-term takeout. Moreover, the source of f

36、ood can’t be guaranteed since producers add harmful substances to the food for higher profit. What’s more, some thieves may pass themselves off as the delivery man which is a threat to students’ possessions and safety on

37、 campus. In a word, the ban is beneficial to all of you so I appeal to everyone obey it automatically. students’ union

38、---- 陳汪怡,語言豐富得體地道,8. 語法錯誤9. 套語連篇10. 不得體不地道,,8. 語法錯誤（母語干擾）,two T-shirts in wrong size and color,Professor Tu will come to our school and give us a lecture, which is welcomed by Shaoxing No. 1 Hiddle School’s teachers

39、and students.,,,,時態(tài)、語態(tài)誤用；主謂不一致；詞性混用；從句使用中缺乏語法結(jié)構(gòu)；……,,9. 套語連篇,,We will appreciate it if you are able to join us and take part in this consequential activity.,,,,,First, please get to the school gate at 8:00 am. After tha

40、t we will set out together by bus. In the end, we will come back at 5:00 pm. Last but not the least, you can bring a camera to record the happy moment.,,,,,With a history of 80 years, our school, where you are in now, is

41、 equipped with three buildings.,,解決對策：夯實語言基礎(chǔ)， 多實踐多積累， 仔細研讀范文。,假定你是李華，從互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上得知第十二屆國際未來商業(yè)領(lǐng)袖峰會（Internet Future Business Leader Summit）將在上海舉行，并歡迎中學生參加。請你寫一封電子郵件申請參加。寫作要點：自我介紹 （包括英

42、語能力）。參加意圖 （增加商業(yè)知識、提高領(lǐng)導力、加強交流）。希望獲準。,申請信,背景介紹 +寫信目的 I read about your announcement of the 12th International Future Business Leader Summit posted on the Internet.I learn about the 12th International Future Business Le

43、ader Summit advertised online./I get to know ….I am writing to apply for participation in it./I am writing to express my desire to participate in it.2. 自我介紹（著重描寫自身優(yōu)勢: 英語很棒、交流技能很強、對商業(yè)很感興趣、有參加此類活動的經(jīng)驗……）have a good comm

44、and of English, speak English fluently, be skilled in communication, have experience in attending such summits, be enthusiastic about financial activities,3. 申請參加的意圖即活動意義（增長商業(yè)知識、提高領(lǐng)導力、加強交流、積累經(jīng)驗、拓寬視野、把中國推向世界、讓世界更加了解中國

45、、搭建中國與世界溝通的橋梁）enrich my business knowledge, my leadership can be greatly boosted, the activity can promote the exchange of views, accumulate experience, build up friendship with peers of the same interest from all o

46、ver the world， expose China to the world, enable the world to have a better understanding of China4. 結(jié)束語（祝愿或希望）I desire that my application can meet your approval.I am looking forward to your reply at your earliest

47、convenience.,Dear Sir or Madam, I’m Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I read about your announcement of the 12th International Future Business Leader Summit posted on the Internet. I’m writing to apply for a

48、n opportunity to join in it. I think my qualifications can meet your requirements. Two years of English learning enables me to communicate fluently in English. In turn, through the summit, I can deepen my understandi

49、ng of business, improve my leadership and communicate with students from other countries as well. I do hope to be admitted to your summit. Looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.

50、 Regards, Li Hua,開頭段的好句：I am writing to make a sincere request for an opportunity to participate in

51、it. I am writing to express my great desire for admission to it. I am writing to apply for access to it. /admission to it. I happened to know that the 12th International Future Business Leader Summit would be held in

52、Shanghai, which appeals to me a great deal. 中間段的好句：Economy or business has kept me spellbound since I was a child. ---陶沂希I am dedicated to learning English from childhood to keep pace with times. So there’s no problem

53、 for me to communicate with native speakers. –錢俊珺,It can be well proved by the prizes I have got in the various English Competitions that I have a good command of English.—方寒It is no use showing off how I have a good co

54、mmand of English, but I do have no trouble communicating in English.---張豪Remarkable scores on papers never satisfy me. I hold the view that only face-to-face communication can promotes language skills. That partly accou

55、nts for my request. ---何志臻Without doubt, if I could be admitted to this summit, it would bring me some benefits. ----沈紀年It will be a perfect platform where I can enrich my business knowledge, strengthen my leadership a

56、s well as promote mutual understanding and communication. –鐘澤宇,As an English club organizer, I have been engaging myself in English learning heart and soul. In return, I have a good command of spoken English. Attending t

57、he summit will surely get me well equipped with better leadership. ---魯家泊結(jié)尾段的好句：I bet my qualification will meet your requirements. Looking forward to your reply. --王詩引I will be obliged to you if you offer me a prec

58、ious opportunity to attend the summit. ---夏俊豪I will be more than glad if I am blessed with this opportunity.—桂宇凡,三、如何改進你的應(yīng)用文寫作,Tip1:詞塊的積累 Tip2:英語常用句子的熟悉和錘煉Tip3:應(yīng)用文可以模板化的一些東西,專題教學---掌握技巧,詞塊的積累(Adv; A

59、dj),Adv: rely heavily on; quarrel bitterly；highly successful; reluctantly; deliberately ；be amply rewarded；equally pleased;Adj:a rewarding cause; particularly appealing; amazing; a remarkable achievement; enjoy treme

60、ndous popularity; prompt action; an impressive reminder; (marvelous; distinguished; splendid; decisive; incredible/inevitible; ),詞塊的積累(Verb),enable sb to do sth; ensure one's success; enrich one's school life;

61、encounter numerous chanllenges; enhance efficiency;refresh one's spirit/sb; relieve guilt/anxiety/stress; remove objections/doubt; relax oneself; restore one's confidence; reassure sb; recall memories；reveal; re

62、place; contain my feelings; conceal the fact;,Noun,體貼consideration ; 同情sympathy 寬恕forgiveness; 慷慨generosity ;感激gratitude; 好客hospitality;忠誠 loyalty ;

63、 分享sharing ；容忍tolerance； 理解understanding;見解 insight； 志向 ambition; 執(zhí)著,信奉 commitment; 勤奮devotion;diligence；毅力 perseverance；persistence熱情 passion=enthusiasm=zeal; 智慧 w

64、isdom; 創(chuàng)造creativity; 合作cooperation; 新奇的事物 novelty,詞塊的積累 (詞組),1、提高 improve/enhance/ promote/ 2、努力 struggle/ strive/ spare no efforts/ 3、得到 gain/ acquire/ obtain/ 4、提供，給 offer/ p

65、resent/ grant/ provide/supply5、表達 convey/extend one's gratitude to...6、實現(xiàn) achieve/ realize/fulfill/attain 7、記得 bear..in mind/ never fade8、有利于 contribute to/ make for/9、影響 be affected / influenced/ be impacted b

66、y10、應(yīng)該；be supposed to 期待 be expected to；一定 be bound to ；保證 be guaranteed to11、忙于；從事 be occupied/ be involved/ engaged in...12、喚起對...意識arouse/ evoke/ one's awareness of...13、吸引注意力 attract/ draw/ capture one's

67、attention catch one’s eye,詞塊的積累 (詞組),“目的”的表達式1. in order to /so as to 2. for the purpose of 3. with the aim of 4. in the hope of 5. be aimed at/aim to do 6. be designed to do 7. be int

68、ended for sth/sb8. be tailored to sb,詞塊的積累 (詞組),“活動意義”的表達式1. enrich after-class life2. broaden one’s horizon 3. get acquaintance with 4. shorten the distance between …5. have a better understanding of profound cult