2017年高考英語書面表達(dá)建議信寫作共43張

1、2017年高考英語書面表達(dá)書信、電子郵件類[ 建 議 信 ],寫作攻略1：什么是建議信？1.建議信是寫信人針對某事向收信人提出建議和忠告。2.建議信有可能是寫給個(gè)人，就其遇到的某個(gè)問題提出自己的看法和觀點(diǎn)；也可能是寫給某個(gè)組織和機(jī)構(gòu)，就改進(jìn)其服務(wù)提出建議或忠告。3.建議信要寫出寫信的原因，建議的內(nèi)容，提出建議的理由。提出的理由要入情入理，語氣一定要禮貌當(dāng)先。因此建議信要寫得目的明確、簡明扼要，具有合理性和說服力。,寫作攻略2

2、：建議信寫作的注意事項(xiàng)a. 這類文章一定要符合英語信件的基本格式。b. 這類文章的基本時(shí)態(tài)多用現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)。c. 掌握建議信的語言特點(diǎn)：語氣要誠懇，有禮貌；建議內(nèi)容要詳盡具體，不能含糊其辭；可提供的建議通常是多個(gè)，因此要注意各條建議之間的銜接。d. 熟悉建議信的常用句型。,寫作攻略3：建議信常用句式,A．建議信開頭常用句式 (照應(yīng)材料，表明意圖)1. After I read your letter in t

3、he newspaper, I am sorry to know that …2. I am very glad to hear that you want to…3. I know you have trouble in…after reading your letter.4. I am writing to you in reply to ...5. You have asked me for my advice on h

4、ow to…and I'll try to make some suggestions.6. I am writing to express my views on/ concerning…7. It's my pleasure to offer you some advice on...,B. 建議信正文常用句式（詳述建議，合情入理）1. Have you considered doing.../ So why

5、not do...?2. Don't you think it more beneficial if you could …3. I would like to suggest that you (should)…4. If I were you, I would…5. In my opinion, it would be wise to take the following action.6. When it com

6、es to such a situation, I would like to make a suggestion that you (should)…7. You'd better do.../ It is/ seems better for you to do...8. The best way to do sth is to do …/ There is no better way to do sth than to

7、 do sth ...9. How/ What about doing...?10. What if...?11. It would be a good idea if...,C.建議信結(jié)尾常用句式（歸納總結(jié)，提出希望）,1. I believe you will take my advice into consideration.2. I hope you will find these suggestions useful/

8、 helpful.3. I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard(在這一點(diǎn)上).4. I do hope that my ideas will work.5. In the end, I will be glad if you find these ideas useful.6. I would be ready to further discuss

9、 this matter/ discuss this matter with you in further detail.7. I am looking forward to your early reply.8. Let’s keep in touch. I hope to hear good news from you. 9. I hope what's mentioned above might be helpful

10、.,10. I will appreciate your consideration of my advice/suggestions/tips.11. Please take good consideration of my advice. Thank you.12. These are my suggestions and I hope they could mean something for a better future

11、of...,寫作攻略4：建議信常用常用關(guān)聯(lián)詞,1. 表示總結(jié)/歸納的過渡詞或短語:in a/ one word, altogether, all in all, on the whole, to sum up/ conclude/ summarize, in conclusion/ summary/ sum, in short2. 表示遞進(jìn)/ 增補(bǔ)的過渡詞或短語moreover ; what’s more; besides; in

12、 addition; also; what’s worse; worse still; even worse; to make matters/ it worse; even; again; as well (as); apart from; too/ either; further more; not only…but also…; and ; neither…nor…; both … and…,3. 表示轉(zhuǎn)折/讓步的過渡

13、詞或短語:but; however; yet; although; even if/ though; evenso/ not; whatever...; however...; ... as...; despite; in spite of; regardless of; while...; on the one hand, … but on the other hand, …; after all; some…, but o

14、thers…; otherwise; for one thing..., but for another (thing)...4. 表示原因的過渡詞或短語:because, since, as, for, now that, because of, thanks to, due to（由于）, owing to, in view of, on account of, as a result/ consequence of,5.

15、 表示結(jié)果的過渡詞或短語:so, thus, therefore, consequently, accordingly, as a result/ consequence, in consequence, so that, for this reason, the reason for/ why...is that...6. 表示條件的過渡詞或短語:if, unless , as long as, on condition tha

16、t..., once...7. 表示時(shí)間的過渡詞或短語:(and) then, after that, next, finally, eventually, later, in the end, recently, at the same time, (in the) meanwhile, at first, at last, from now on, until/ till, afterwards, on/ upon doing,

17、 shortly/ soon after, before long, at the beginning of8. 表示論述順序關(guān)系的過渡詞或短語: first, firstly, second, secondly, third, thirdly, above all, first of all, to begain/ start with, last but not least, lastly,9. 表示解釋說明的過渡詞或短語:i

18、n other words; that is (to say); namely; ..., which means10. 表示進(jìn)行舉例說明的過渡詞或短語:for instance, for example, such as, like, examples include..., ...and so on, and/ or the like, take... for example11. 表示比較對比的過渡詞或短語:instead

19、; instead of; meanwhile; on the contrary; unlike; different from...; as... as...; on the one hand, … and on the other hand, …; some…, and/ while others…; ... while...; for one thing..., and for another (thing)...; simila

20、rly; equally; similar to...; in the same way/ manner,12. 表示強(qiáng)調(diào)事實(shí)的過渡詞或短語:in fact/ reality/ truth/ practice, to tell you the truth, to be honest/ frank/ sure, as a matter of fact, honestly speaking, actually, above all, af

21、ter all, anyway, anyhow, certainly/ surely, indeed, really, especially, in particular, truly, importantly, most important, obviously, only/ just/ simply/ merely, without doubt/ out of question13. 表示選擇的過渡詞或短語：either...

22、or..., or, or else, otherwise14. 表示表目的的過渡詞或短語：for this purpose, so that, in order to, so as to, with the purpose of,假設(shè)你是某報(bào)社編輯，最近收到讀者李華的一封來信。信中李華提到自己在學(xué)習(xí)英語的過程中遇到了困難，這讓他很苦惱。請根據(jù)以上提示，寫一篇回給李華的建議信，幫他解決困難，促進(jìn)學(xué)習(xí)。 建議內(nèi)容： 1

23、. 不要灰心，保持良好心態(tài)； 2. 掌握學(xué)習(xí)方法； 3. 培養(yǎng)對英語的興趣愛好。注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右； 2. 信的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)； 3. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。,建議信寫作范例,第一步：審題養(yǎng)成重視審題的習(xí)慣。高考書面表達(dá)是半封閉性的寫作，審題十分重要?，F(xiàn)以樣題為例，談?wù)勅绾螌忣}：,第一人稱,書信,對英語學(xué)習(xí)給出建議,說理的邏輯性,一般現(xiàn)在

24、時(shí),第二步：構(gòu)思---建議信結(jié)構(gòu)及內(nèi)容要點(diǎn),三段式：第一段： 點(diǎn)明主題：表明寫作意圖， （有時(shí)要簡單介紹自己）。第二段： 陳述事實(shí)，提出建議，給出理由 （是什么，為什么，怎么樣）第三段： 總結(jié)全文，表明希望,草稿,修改,謄寫,,,,審題,建議信重點(diǎn),第二段：⑴ 說明建議的內(nèi)容；（是什么）⑵ 提出具體建議的原因；（為什么）⑶ 指出采納建議的益處。（怎么樣）注意事項(xiàng)

25、：語言要委婉、禮貌，顧及對方感受。,適當(dāng)運(yùn)用模板,Dear Li Hua, I've received your letter, saying+ 你碰到的問題. I’m sorry to hear that you have such a difficult problem. My suggestions are as follows. Firstly, ___________

26、_, because________. Secondly, you'd better________________, because_________. Thirdly, you’d better _________________. Only in this way can you __________. What’s more, _____. I hope my suggestions will b

27、e helpful for you. Best wishes. Yours, xxx,Dear Li Hua, I've received y

28、our letter, saying you have some difficulties in learning English. I'm sorry to hear that you have such a difficult problem. However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. My suggestions ar

29、e as follows. Firstly, you should listen to the teachers carefully in the class. Secondly, the best way to learn English is reading it well and knowing the meanings of it. Thirdly, you can speak English with your classm

30、ates and teachers, which can improve your listening and speaking abilities. What's more, the most important advice is reading English books before the class and after the class. I hope my suggestions will b

31、e helpful for you. Best wishes. Yours, xxx,范文,其他模板,Dear___, I’m glad to receiv

32、e your letter asking for my advice on how to ____./ I know that ____ from____. Backgrounds and problems,,（1）,Here are a few suggestions/ Here is some advice that/ on_____. First, it is important to _____. The

33、n/ Second/ Also, ____. Besides/ In addition/ Furthermore, it should be a good idea to ____. I am sure that/ I hope that____. Suggestions, thanks and hope,,Thanks for your consideration. I’m looking forward t

34、o/ Looking forward to _____. Yours, ______,,Signature,Dear _____,I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to

35、 (引出主題). Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to . Then, it also helps to . Besides, it should be a good idea to . You can also . (此三句不同的句式提出建議)As to , I sugg

36、est (有時(shí)根據(jù)需要具體到某一反面). In addition, (其他建議). I'm sure (預(yù)測可能的結(jié)果，給對方以行動的信心和決心).I'm looking forward to (表達(dá)愿望). Yours sin

37、cerely , Li Hua,（2）,Dear____, You have asked me for my advice on how to..., and I'll try to make some suggestions here. In my opinion, you w

38、ould be wise to take the following actions: First, ... If you do this, ... Second, ... This way, ... And last, ... By doing this, ... I hope you'll find these ideas useful and I would be ready to dis

39、cuss this matter with you to further details. Good luck with you. Yours, XXX,（3）,寫作訓(xùn)練

40、1 假設(shè)你是的李華，下面是你校英語報(bào)第一期第二版的主要內(nèi)容。請你給編輯寫一封信，對該版內(nèi)容發(fā)表評論并提出改進(jìn)建議。版面主要內(nèi)容：體育新聞、學(xué)習(xí)方法、疑難問答等。,注意：詞數(shù)100左右；信的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。,Dear editor, I was glad to read our English newspaper, especially Section B

41、edited by you. As far as I know, most of the students are fond of this section because it provides us with a lot of news both from the school and around the world. What's more, it gives us sports news, as well as t

42、ips on how to study. My favorite part , though, is Ask and Answer, since our questions can be answered by teachers in time. It also helps us communicate with our teachers and schoolmates, which is of great help to our gr

43、owth.,范 文,Despite the good it has done to us, I would still like to make some suggestions. The section would attract more readers if you were to add more entertainment contents, such as hunorous stories or jokes which wo

44、uld make it more lovely and interesting. I'm looking forward to reading more interesting stories in our English newspapers. Yours,

45、 Li Hua,寫作訓(xùn)練2 假設(shè)你是的李華，最近你發(fā)現(xiàn)學(xué)校里的浪費(fèi)現(xiàn)象非常嚴(yán)重。請給英語讀寫園地（English Reading and Writing Space)的編輯投稿反映該現(xiàn)象，并提出自己的建議。注意：,詞數(shù)100左右；信的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。參考詞匯：美德virtue;提倡advocate,Dear editors,

46、 I am Li Hua, a student in class One, Grade One. __________________________________________________________________ I am looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely,

47、 Lihua,,Dear editors, I am Li Hua, a student in Class One, Grade One. Recently, I have found that the waste on our campus is getting serious, such as the waste of water, food and

48、 electrical energy.,范 文,Faced with these phenomena（現(xiàn)象）, I really feel worried. So here is some advice I hope will help. English Reading and Writing Space is a good medium to advocate（倡議） that saving is a traditional virt

49、ue.,So would you publish more instructive articles on this topic first? Then, some activities such as holding debates or seeing movies about the phenomenon will help students get aware of the harm of wasting and realize

50、the importance of saving. Do you agree with me? I am looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua,假設(shè)你是學(xué)生李華，你的英

51、國朋友Tom目前正在努力學(xué)習(xí)漢語，但在學(xué)習(xí)中遇到了一些困難，因此他在幾天前給你發(fā)電子郵件求助，詢問怎樣才能學(xué)好漢語。請根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給他回復(fù)一封郵件： 1．感謝他之前對你英語學(xué)習(xí)的建議和幫助； 2．介紹漢語語言的特點(diǎn)以及學(xué)習(xí)漢語的方法； 3．邀請他暑假期間來中國，交流語言學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)驗(yàn)。注意： 1．詞數(shù)：100左右; 2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。,寫作訓(xùn)練 3,Dear Tom, I’

52、m so glad to receive your last letter. I can’t thank you enough for your advice and help in my English study, due to which I’ve made great progress in learning English.,As for your language study, I’m concerned to know t

53、hat you are facing some difficulties when studying Chinese. I’m willing to offer you some help. As you know, Chinese is so flexible that you need to pay attention to the different meanings of a word or phrase in differen

54、t situations. Besides, it is difficult for foreigners to write Chinese characters, especially for the beginners. So I advise you to learn some oral Chinese first. Then you may begin to try writing some simple Chinese cha

55、racters. Finally, there is one point for you to remember: practice makes perfect.,Another suggestion is that you should experience the native Chinese language environment in person. How about coming to China during the s

56、ummer holiday? We can talk about our experience in language learning with each other. Best wishes! Yours sincerely, Li Hua,[精華

57、點(diǎn)評],建議信的寫作關(guān)鍵在于作者給出建議的語氣委婉而中肯, 使對方容易接受。很多學(xué)生習(xí)慣使用祈使句或者You should的句型表示建議, 這樣比較生硬，因此應(yīng)轉(zhuǎn)換不同的句型使語言豐富, 如使用you should..., you had better..., remember to do等句型。在最后祝愿對方成功的時(shí)候, 可以用簡明扼要的句型, 如wish you good luck / wish you success / may

58、you succeed, 使文章長短句結(jié)合得當(dāng)。,附：請求信模板,Dear___________,　 I am writing to formally request to___________(請求的內(nèi)容)　 The reason for_____ is that______(給出原因). I_____, so I_____(給出細(xì)節(jié)) I would also like to request______(提出進(jìn)一步

59、的要求). I am sorry for any inconvenience I have caused. 　 Thank you for your attention to these requests. If you have any questions, do not hesitate to contact me at _______(電話號碼). I look forward to a favorable reply. / I

60、 would appreciate it if you can give me a favorable reply.　　 Yours sincerely， 　　 Li Ming,第二節(jié) 書面表達(dá) (滿分25分） 假定你是李華，你校圖書館最近新設(shè)了一個(gè)英語閱覽室，很受學(xué)生歡迎。請用英語給閱覽室管理老師Peter Chen寫封信。

61、信的主要內(nèi)容包括： 1．閱覽室給學(xué)生帶來的好處（至少兩點(diǎn)）； 2．閱覽室仍需改進(jìn)的建議（至少兩點(diǎn)）；注意： 1．詞數(shù)100左右； 2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。 Dear Peter Chen, Recently the library of our school has set up an English Reading Room. Best wishes!

62、 Yours, Li Hua,Homework,【參考例文】 Dear Peter Chen,

63、 Recently the library of our school has set up an English Reading Room. We students can read English novels as well as English newspapers and magazines here. The reading room becomes increasingly popular because it benef

64、its us a lot. On the one hand, it is convenient for us to enrich our lives and broaden our minds by reading; on the other hand, it helps develop our interest in studying English. Despite the good it has done to us

65、, I’d like to make some suggestions. Have you considered opening it all weekdays, instead of just on Friday afternoon? Besides, the limited number of books available is better to be enlarged. I hope you will find t

66、hese suggestions useful and thank you for your time. Best wishes! Yours,