【原創(chuàng)精品】雅思高分備考技巧手冊

1、Academic Writing Task 1,本人雅思考試總分8.5，為更好幫助同學，現(xiàn)原創(chuàng)本雅思A類考試必備手冊，為網(wǎng)絡唯一完整版,2,IELTS Writing,Saturday / Thursday Morning3rd paper Test,3,Question Booklet,Task 1Report (Academic) / Letter (General)150w, 20mTask 2Essay250w,

2、40m,4,Writing Booklet,Writing Bookletningboyu_nos@yahoo.com.cnPassword: ieltswritingPencil and Eraser,5,Scoring,ExaminerTask 1 and 2 : 0 - 9Writing BandT1 * 1 / 3 + T2 * 2 / 36 → 6.5Overall Band,6,Requirement

3、,Academic – Overall ScoreLanguage School 5.5Undergraduate 6Graduate 6.5 Famous Universities + 0.5Popular Majors + 0.5,7,,,,,,,,,,,8,,,,,,,,,9,Registration,ObjectiveAn acceptable score within the shortest

4、timeThe earlier, the more choices !No deadline, no completion !,10,Registration,Self-AnalysisNCEE1004.5NCEE130or CET-4 425 5.0CET-4600or CET-6 4255.5CET-6 600or NETEM 706.0>4hrs / day, 1

5、point / per 2 months,11,Considerate IELTS,Test as often as possibleReschedule ( + 500 RMB)Refund ( - 750 RMB),Teaching Material,《雅思寫作勝經(jīng)》、群言出版社,12,13,Task 1 - Question Grouping,Figure (75% 2008Q1)Multiple / SingleN

6、on-Figure (25% 2008Q1)Flow chart / Map,14,Writing Procedure,Read + Plan (3 mins)Write (16 mins)Check (1 mins),15,Read,Words:paragraph 2Pictures: Words (title, legend, axis)Number (unit, digit)Make notes on the

7、question booklet !,Numbers,10 million / millionsthousands ofmillions ofbillions of,17,Scoring Criterion,TA : ContentCC : StructureLR : WordsGRA : Sentences,18,Marking Criterion,UNDERLENGTHNO OF WORDSPENALTYOFF

8、 - TOPICMEMORISEDILLEGIBLE,19,Plan - Content,Summarize Features, not list dataa1, a2, a3, … , anTrendMax / MinSlopeA, B, C, …Max / Min,20,Paragraph 3,Comparisons within the chart or between the chartsSelect Ma

9、in Features (recreates the picture in the examiner’s mind)Supporting DataReport facts, not opinions,21,Plan - Structure,Paragraph or not?reader – friendlyHow to Paragraph?A new idea, a new paragraphIntroduction

10、 / Conclusion (if needed),22,Thinking Style,,23,Paragraphs,Multiple ChartsIntroductionChart 1Chart 2…ComparisonSingle ChartIntroductionFeature 1Feature 2… Conclusion (if needed),24,Plan - Structure,Linking D

11、evices (LD)Between paragraphsBetween featuresWithin sentences,25,Language Requirement,WordCorrect spellingenviroment / environmentWord Levelget / achieve a band 8Word Variety (Avoid repetition)a good / well-paid

12、 / satisfactory / decent job,26,Sentence,Grammatical AccuracyThere is a boy asks you out.Sentence LengthBand 9 : 20+Band 7 : 15Structure VarietyA new challenger comes here.Here comes a new challenger.,27,Word &

13、; Time,Multiple / Single ChartsIntro. / Intro.(30w, 1s)Chart 1 / Feature 1(50w, 4s)Chart 2 / Feature 2(50w, 4s)…Comparison / Conclusion(30w, 1s),Paragraph 2Copied phrases will not be countedParap

14、hrase the rubric,Introduction,chart = graph = diagramline, curvebar, columnpietable = figures = statisticsSave ‘below’,Word (B - 78),give information aboutrevealindicatedemonstrateSimple Present Tense,Word,th

15、e UKBritainmost popularfavorite / fashionable / stylishcountrynation,Word,,UK residents to visitUK travelers / visitors / touristsSpecificin 1999,Passive VoiceThe chart shows A. (do)A is shown by the chart

16、. (be done) The line chart reveals visits to and from the UK.Visits to and from the UK are revealed in the line chart.,Structure Variety,The line chart reveals … , and the bar graph indicates …The line chart revea

17、ls …, and … are indicated in the bar graph.,Compound Sentence,Introduction,The line chart reveals visits to and from Britain and UK travelers’ top 5 favorite nations in 1999 are indicated in the bar graph.,Linking Device

18、s,Between paragraphs (B - 78)According to the chart,line chartupper / lower chartchart 1chart of visits to and from the UK,Between Features (B - 51),also / besides / on the other handbut / however / converselywh

19、ile / in particular,Basic Structure 1,The visits increased greatly (1) (2) (3)from about 12 to 57 million (4)from 1979 to 1999. (5),(1) Subjects,Legendvisits abroad by UK re

20、sidentsParagraph 2travel from the UKSynonymsUK visitors / travelers / tourists,(1) Subjects,it / theyThe visits increased from 1979 to 1999. In particular, they increased most quickly from 1985 to 1988.,(2) Verbs,

21、increase : decrease / rise : fallgo up : come downclimb : slideascend : declinerocket : collapse,(2) Verbs,Tenseincreasedincreaseis expected / predicted to increase,(3) Adverbs,sharply / rapidly / swiftlyslowly /

22、 gradually / tardilygreatly / vastly / considerablyslightly / marginally / minutely,(3) Adverbs & (4) Numbers,about / around / roughly / more or lessfrom about 12 to 53 million,(5) Time,from 1979 to 1999between

23、1979 and 1999during the 20 years / two decadesstarting from 1979,Chart 1 (Band 6.5),According to the line chart, visits abroad by UK residents increased from about 12 to 57 million from 1979 to 1999. While, overseas tr

24、avelers to Britain went up from about 10 to 27 million. It is obvious that UK tourists were more and climbed faster than overseas ones during the period.,Basic Structure 2,There was a sharp increase in the visits

25、 (3) (2) (1) from about 12 to 53 million (4)from 1979 to 1999. (5),Basic Structure 3,A sharp increase was seen in (3) (2)

26、 (6)the visits from about 12 to 53 million (1) (4)from 1979 to 1999. (5),48,A sharp increase (2)&(1), (6),a sharp / slow / great / slight increasean upward / rising / incre

27、asing tendencya downward / falling / decreasing trendshow / prove / witness,(2) Verb,keep / remainunchanged / constant / stablefluctuateupward / downwarddouble / triple / quadruple,Chart 1,According to the line ch

28、art, both UK tourists abroad and overseas ones to the UK went up from 1979 to 1999 and the former climbed more markedly than the latter. In 1979, UK visitors were only around 2 million more than their overseas counterpar

29、ts, being approximately 12 and 10 million respectively. However, two decades later, they almost doubled the foreign travelers to Britain (roughly 53 and 27 million separately).,Chart 2 (Band 6.5),The bar graph demonstrat

30、es that the most UK visitors went to France and Spain, which were 11.0 and 9.5 million. Also, many British travelers were attracted by the USA(4.0 million), Greece(3.5 million) and Turkey(2.0 million).,Chart 2,The bar gr

31、aph demonstrates that France and Spain were the favorite countries for UK tourists in 1999, which attracted around 11.0 and 9.5 million UK visitors respectively. Remotely following were the USA, Greece and Turkey with 4.

32、0, 3.5 and 2.0 million travelers separately.,Comparison (band 6.5),What is also worth mentioning is that almost 40% UK tourists selected France and Spain in 1999, if the two diagrams are considered as a whole.,Comparison

33、,What is also worth mentioning is that France and Spain alone accounted for almost 40 percent of UK tourists abroad in 1999, if the two diagrams are considered as a whole.,Professional English,www.economist.comwww.guard

34、ian.co.ukwww.ftchinese.com.cnwww.cnn.comwww.thestreet.comthestreet TV,Check,Sample Answer (I4 - 168)ScriptComment – Script Corresponding,Comment,TAUnder length& dollarNo comparisonCCNo referenceLR & G

35、RANarrow sentence typeBasic errors,I4 - 54,demandused / need / requirement / consumption typicalaverage / representativeuseconsumehomehousehold / familypassive voice & compound sentence,Introduction,The cu

36、rve chart reveals electricity used in England during average days in winter and summer and how electricity is consumed in a typical English household is indicated in the pie graph.,Read Chart 1,Unithrs / yrso’clock : a

37、m, a.m. AM, A.MNumber38,000 units,Read Chart 2,Everyday wordskettlemicrowave ovenrange hood,Plan,Winter > summerNumbers : Max & Min / AverageWinter, Summer :Numbers : Max & Min,Words,peak / summit /

38、highest pointnadir / touch the bottom / lowest pointunchanged / constant / stable / stationary phase,Chart 1 (Band 6.5),According to the curve chart, daily electricity need is higher in winter (38,000 units on average)

39、 than in summer (18,000 units on average). In winter, electricity consumption peaks at 2:00 am and 10:00 pm while it touches the bottom at 0:00 am and 8:00 am. On the other hand, in summer, it summits at 2:00 pm and 11:0

40、0 pm, but has a nadir at 9:00 am and a lower stationary phase from 4:00 pm to 9:00 pm.,Chart 1,According to the curve chart, daily electricity need is higher in winter (38,000 units on average) than in summer (18,000 uni

41、ts on average), although both of them are uneven during the day. In winter, electricity consumption peaks at 2:00 am and 10:00 pm while it touches the bottom at 0:00 am and 8:00 am. In contrast, the summer summits come l

42、ater than winter ones at 2:00 pm and 11:00 pm. A nadir is seen nearly 9:00 am and a lower stationary phase is witnessed from 4:00pm to 9:00pm.,occupy,be shared byaccount forbe responsible forbe in charge ofbe in the

43、charge of,Percentage,a small percentage of … (20%)a quarter of …the minority of … (40%)half of …the majority of … (60%)three quarters of …most of … (80%)one-fifth / one-third,Structures,1 occupies / accounts for

44、the majority of A (x%).y% of A is shared by / is in the charge of 2.3 and 4 are responsible for / in charge of the rest, with z% and w% respectively.,Chart 2 (Band 6.5),The pie graph demonstrates that heating rooms a

45、nd water occupies the majority of electricity consumption(52.5%). Then, 17.5% of the electricity demand is shared by ovens, kettles and washing machines. Lighting, TV, radio and vacuum cleaners, food mixers, electric too

46、ls are responsible for the rest, with 15% each.,Chart 2,The pie graph demonstrates that the majority of electricity consumption (52.5%) is shared by heating rooms and water. Then, ovens, kettles and washing machines occ

47、upy 17.5% of the electricity demand. The rest is in the charge of lighting, TV, radio and vacuum cleaners, food mixers, electric tools, with 15% each.,Comparison (Band 6.5),What is also worth mentioning is that heating r

48、ooms and water is the reason for the higher electricity demand in winter than in summer, if the two diagrams are considered as a whole.,Comparison,What is also worth mentioning is that electricity for heating rooms and w

49、ater is probably the major cause for the higher electricity demand in winter than in summer, if the two diagrams are considered as a whole.,I4 – 164,TAComparison within / between the chartsConfusing time expressionsC

50、CPoor paragraphingLR & GRASpelling errors (5),I4 - 31,proportionpercentage / share / figurescategorytype / kind / groupfamilyhousehold,Plan,aged vs not agedsingle vs doublewith vs without children,I4 – 1

51、62,give a breakdown ofHow to include numbers?A (11%)A, which is …A, with / at …A, comprising / consisting of …,Model Answer,It is noticeable that … (word filler)It is obvious that …It is easy to see that …Overa

52、ll, the table suggests that …,2003年9月20日The diagram below shows the method of obtaining water outdoors.,,Object,ContentUnderstand the important stagesFind a place to start,Structure,IntroductionPreparationProcedure

53、(Time / Sequence)Conclusion (if needed),Linking Device - Time,To begin with Next Then LaterFinallyAt the same time / Meanwhile,Sequence,the first stage involves in the next stage in the following stage in the l

54、ast stage,Purpose,in order thatso thatin order to / in order not to so as to / so as not to,Language,Opening SentencesVarying vocabularyPresent simple / Passive VoiceOpening SentencesThe picture illustrates … The

55、 whole procedure can be divided into … stages.,Varying Vocabulary,obtain, accumulate, collect, gathervaporThe water turns into gas, rises and turns back into liquid when it accumulates on the sheet of plastic.,2006年1

56、月14日The diagram below shows the process of glass recycling.,,Flow Chart,When the cleaning is done, the bottles are transported to a glass factory where they are broke into glass pieces which are then poured into a furna

57、ce.,2003年9月20日The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.,,Content,TransportationParking,90,Site Selection,Introduction

58、S1 (Varying Vocabulary)S2Conclusion,91,Development (080329 Bridgetown),IntroductionMap 1Map 2Relationship between development,92,93,Writing Rules,No TitleBigger, bigger and bigger10-12 w / line,94,Four score and

59、 seven years ago, our fathers brought forth upon this continent a new nation: conceived in liberty, and dedicated to the proposition that all men are created equal. Now we are engaged in a great civil war. .

60、.testing whether that nation, or any nation so conceived and so dedicated. . . can long endure. We are met on a great battlefield of that war. We have come to dedicate a portion of that field as a final resti

61、ng place for those who here gave their lives that that nation might live. It is altogether fitting and proper that we should do this. But, in a larger sense, we cannot dedicate. . .we cannot consecrate. . . w

62、e cannot hallow this ground. The brave men, living and dead, who struggled here have consecrated it, far above our poor power to add or detract. The world will little note, nor long remember, what we say here, but it can

63、 never forget what they did here. It is for us the living, rather, to be dedicated here to the unfinished work which they who fought here have thus far so nobly advanced. It is rather for us to be here dedica

64、ted to the great task remaining before us. . .that from these honored dead we take increased devotion to that cause for which they gave the last full measure of devotion. . . that we here highly resolve that these dead s

65、hall not have died in vain. . . that this nation, under God, shall have a new birth of freedom. . . and that government of the people. . .by the people. . .for the people. . . shall not perish from the earth.,95,Four sco

66、re and seven years ago, our fathers brought forth upon this continent a new nation: conceived in liberty, and dedicated to the proposition that all men are created equal. Now we are engaged in a great civil

67、war. . .testing whether that nation, or any nation so conceived and so dedicated. . . can long endure. We are met on a great battlefield of that war. We have come to dedicate a portion of that field as a fin

68、al resting place for those who here gave their lives that that nation might live. It is altogether fitting and proper that we should do this. But, in a larger sense, we cannot dedicate. . .we cannot consecra

69、te. . . we cannot hallow this ground. The brave men, living and dead, who struggled here have consecrated it, far above our poor power to add or detract. The world will little note, nor long remember, what we say here, b

70、ut it can never forget what they did here. It is for us the living, rather, to be dedicated here to the unfinished work which they who fought here have thus far so nobly advanced. It is rather for us to be h

71、ere dedicated to the great task remaining before us. . .that from these honored dead we take increased devotion to that cause for which they gave the last full measure of devotion. . . that we here highly resolve that th