高中英語作文--建議信

1、建議信建議信(1)闡釋原因；提出建議類闡釋原因；提出建議類請你代表你班同學給校長寫一封信，反映一下你校食堂的幾點問題，以引起學校重視，并針對問題提出兩條合理建議。問題包括：1.菜價昂貴，菜市單一；2.排隊時間長，浪費午休時間；3.味道不佳，浪費現象嚴重。注意：1.詞數不少于120；2.開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數；3.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。參考詞匯:食堂canteenDearPrincipalRecentlymanystude

2、ntsarediscussingtheproblemsofthecanteen.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Isincerelyhopeyoucanadoptmysuggest

3、ions.Thankyou!YoursLiHua作文范文：作文范文：DearPrincipalRecentlymanystudentsarediscussingtheproblemsofthecanteen.Theproblemsareasfollows.Somestudentsthinkthepricesofthedishesaretoohighthatthechoicesaretoolimited.Anotherconcernist

4、hatthetimespentinwaitingissolongthatwehavelesstimetohavearest.Meanwhilesomestudentsthinkthatthetasteofthefoodisawfulwhichleadstoalotofwaste.AsfarasI’mconcernedmeasuresaresupposedtobetakentoimprovetheconditionsofthecantee

5、n.Firstofallit’ssuggestedthatthepricesbemereasonablethechoicesofdishesbemevarious.Inadditionit’sbettertoopenmeservicewindowstoreducewaitingtime.Isincerelyhopeyoucanadoptmysuggestions.Thankyou!需注意的詞匯、表達：需注意的詞匯、表達：1.delici

6、ouswaitingtaste(n.味道)tasty(adj.可口的)cook(n.廚師)cooker(n.炊具)price價格2.lowerbringdowntheprice降低價格3.atalowerreasonableprice以較低的價格4.varietiesofdishes種類多樣的菜品5.Fonething…….Fanother……6.makesb(not)dosth7.waitstinlineinaqueuefalongt

7、ime8.Thekindsoffoodarefew.表達食堂出現的問題：表達食堂出現的問題：9.Thepricesofdishesaresohighthatmanyofuscan’taffdthem.10.Therearesofewdishestochoosefromwhichisfarfromsatisfacty.whichcan’tsatisfyourneeds.11.Ittakesussomuchtimetostinlinewhi

8、chdecreasesourtimeofrestatnoon.12.Thefoodinthecanteendoesn’ttastegood.nice.Thetasteoffoodinthecanteenisn’tgood.13.Thefoodinthecanteentastessobadthatalotoffoodisleftwasted14.It’sawasteoftimetostinlinefalongtime.15.Thefood

9、inthecanteentastessobadwhichleadstoaseverephenomenonofwastingfood.16.Inthelongrunit’sbadfourhealthstudy.17.Itgoeswithoutsayingthatitwillinfluenceoursleepintheafternoon.表達提出的建議：表達提出的建議：18.Improvingthetasteofthefoodisalsoa

10、goodsolutiontotheproblems.19.Ithinkit’snecessarytoprovidemekindsoffood.20.It’shightimethatwetookmeasurestosolvetheproblems.Soit’shightimefustotakemeasures21.TosolvetheproblemsIthinkthecanteenshouldsetupanewfigure(形象)impr

11、ovethepresentconditiontosatisfythestudents’needs.22.Wehopethecanteencanprovideuswithdishesofahighqualityatareasonableprice.23.Thecanteenshouldopenmewindowssothatweneedn’twaitsolong.24.AsfarasI’mconcernedthecanteenshoulda

12、ttachimptancetothequality.What’smedifferentkindsoffoodshouldbeprovided.25.Measuresaresupposedtobetakentoimprovetheconditionsofthecanteen.建議模板：建議模板：Dear….I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingfmyadviceonhowto…….(引出話題引出話題).Herea

13、reafewsuggestions.Firstofallitisimptanttodosth.Thenitalsohelpstodosth.Besidesitshouldbeagoodideatodosth.建議句型積累：建議句型積累：需要注意積累的詞匯、短語、和句子：需要注意積累的詞匯、短語、和句子：主格主格賓格賓格形容性物主代詞形容性物主代詞名詞性物主代詞名詞性物主代詞反身代詞反身代詞Imemyminemyself第一人稱第一人稱w

14、eusouroursourselvesyouyouyouryoursyourself第二人稱第二人稱youyouyouryoursyourselveshehimhishishimselfsheherherhersherselfitititsitsitself第三人稱第三人稱theythemtheirtheirsthemselvesdaughter女兒expectation期望bewriedconcernedabout擔心calmdown

15、冷靜下來ataloss迷惑不解keepintouchwith保持聯(lián)系bestrictwithsbinsth在某方面對某人要求嚴格hearttoheart推心置腹的idea注意想法test測試text文本cheat欺騙wantsbtodosth想讓某人做某事1.Itwasbecauseshedidn’twanttoletyoudownthatshepretendedtoachievehighsces.2.Sheisn’tawarethat

16、thelieshavehurtbothyouherself.3.Beingateenagersheneedstobeencouraged.it’syouwhocandothis.4.Itisprobablyyourhighexpectationstoherthatmakesherdecidetolie.5.Youshouldfigureoutthereasonwhysheliedtoyoubefesolvingtheproblem.6.

17、Itgoeswithoutsayingthatlyingisbadbehavi.7.Thereasonwhyshedidn’ttellyouthetruthmaybethatshedidn’twanttoletyoudown.8.Itissuggestedthatyoushouldhaveafacetofacetalkwithhersothatshemightopenherhearttoyou.9.Toavoidtheliesyoush

18、ouldencourageherratherthanblameherwhenshefailsinexams10.Thereasonthatleadstotheproblemmaybevarious.11.Confrontedwith(面對)theseproblemsyoushouldtakeaseriesofeffectivemeasurestohelpyoudaughter.12.AsfarasI’mconcernedit’sbett

19、ertocommunicatewithherinafriendlywaytoletherknowit’swrongtotelllies.13.It’ssuggestedthatyoushouldattachmeimptancetophysicalmentalhealth.Meoverit’sbettertoencouragehertodowhatshewants.改錯：改錯：1.Therearesomeadvice.2.Don’tsad

20、.3.Youshouldgivehermeencourage.4.Shemayafraidthatifshefailsintheexamyouwillpunishher.5.Ifshehasdifficultyinlearningyoushouldinspireshehelpsheout.6.Shedoesn’twantyouangry.7.Pleasenottobesowried.8.Oneofthereasonisthatsheis

21、n’tdaretotellyouthetruth.9.Becausesheafraidparents.10.Soshedon’twanttomentionit.11.Youshouldapologytoher.12.You’dbettertoencouragehertobeahonestpeople.13.You’dbetterbecareaboutherhealthstudy.14.I’mveryunderstyourconditio