中考英語(yǔ)作文寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)精華版

1、English writing,,,Dear Dr. Know， I’ m pleased to write to ask for some help. I want to tell you some problems we meet in English study. First，some of us aren’t interested in English. We thinkstudying E

2、nglish is such a boring thing. And then it’s sodifficult for us to remember all the words in the texts. So lots of us don’t have enough confidence to keep up English study. And we are always afraid to join the group d

3、iscussion. What’s more, there are so many new words we haven’t meet before in the passage. I don’t know what to do.Sometimes we can’t understand the main idea, let alone(更不用說(shuō))answer the questions about them. But th

4、e most difficult thing is to write. We often use wrong words and sentences. Can you help us? How can we improve our English? Pleasegive us some useful advice. Thank you very much. Please write soon.,Mary,(the beg

5、inning),(the ending),,the body（正文）,basic structure(基本結(jié)構(gòu)安排),basic steps(基本寫(xiě)作步驟),search（審）list（列）add(加: 開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾) connect(連)beautify(美：諺語(yǔ)/例子),健康很重要。在學(xué)習(xí)和工作的壓力日趨增大的今天，會(huì)休息的人才會(huì)有健康的身體。人們是如何度過(guò)假期的呢？國(guó)際健康組織對(duì)此作了一次調(diào)查，右圖是他們此次的調(diào)查結(jié)果。根據(jù)

6、你所得的信息，請(qǐng)為國(guó)際健康組織寫(xiě)一篇完整的調(diào)查報(bào)告,并提倡大家進(jìn)行假日休閑。,審(search),,,,,travel,stay at home,visit friends or parents,work,,,,,,,,如何度假調(diào)查報(bào)告倡議假日休閑,,stay at home,work,,visit friends or parents,,travel,,列(list),根據(jù)以下關(guān)鍵詞及圖表用簡(jiǎn)單的句子列出文章的要點(diǎn)。,,A lo

7、t of people travel. Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work.Enjoy your vacation.,列(list),How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report.

8、 （the beginning）A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the internet. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax wel

9、l work well. （the ending）,加(add),加首尾，使結(jié)構(gòu)完整?？梢圆扇】偡挚偨Y(jié)構(gòu)，開(kāi)頭或結(jié)尾的句子應(yīng)注意簡(jiǎn)潔、漂亮。,How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report.According to it, a lot of people travel. And some people stay at ho

10、me. They watch TV or surf the Internet. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.,,,,,連(connect),Writing skills（“寫(xiě)”的技巧）,,

11、方法一:善用詞匯 甚至善用高級(jí)詞匯,Which is better?,他們?cè)诤┥下?tīng)音樂(lè)。,A They listened to the music on the beach.B They enjoyed the music on the beach.,,,,,Which is better?,我希望你能幫助我。,A I wish you can help m

12、e. B I’m looking forward to your help.,,,Which is better?,他們很早就到了。,A They arrived early.B They arrived as early as they could.,,,,Which is better?,最后，他的狗得救了，他感到很驚訝。,A His dog was saved at last. He was very

13、surprised.B To his surprise, his dog was saved at last.,,,,,A I think learning English is interesting.B I find it really fun to learn English .,,,我認(rèn)為學(xué)英語(yǔ)很有趣。,我們應(yīng)該保護(hù)環(huán)境。,A We should protect the environment.B

14、 It’s our duty to protect the environment.,,,方法二:活用多種句型,Writing skills（“寫(xiě)”的技巧）,她還小，搬不動(dòng)這么重的箱子。,A She is very young. She can’t carry the heavy box.B She is too young to carry the heavy box.C She is so

15、 young that she can’t carry the …D She is not old enough to carry the…,,,,,,方法三:妙用關(guān)聯(lián)詞,Writing skills（“寫(xiě)”的技巧）,1.表示并列或遞進(jìn): and, as well as, both…and, what’s more not only…but also, neither…nor2.表示

16、選擇: or, either…or3.表示轉(zhuǎn)折: but,however,although\though,after all,anyway4.表示因果: because, so, therefore,since,for,as a result5.表示條件: if , unless6.表示對(duì)比: instead, not…but, while, in the same way, on the one h

17、and…on the other hand7.表示解釋: for example, for instance, such as, that is to say, in other words,to tell the truth8.表示順序: to begin with, firstly, first (of all), second(ly), next, later, since then, from

18、then on, finally, in the end9.表示強(qiáng)調(diào): also, besides, especially, actually, in fact10.表示結(jié)論: all in all, altogether, in a word, generally speaking, in short,關(guān)聯(lián)詞(connection words),Let’s try,_____________ I

19、 am tired, I keep on working till midnight.He didn’t go to movies, he went to the concert ______.We like doing kinds of sports _____ swimming, running and hiking._____, he stood up. Then he got out. _____, he went bac

20、k. ____________, he smiled.,Though\Although,instead,like,First,Next,Finally\At last,How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report.According to it, a lot of people travel. And some people st

21、ay at home. They watch TV or surf the Internet. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.,連(connect),美(beautify),We inter

22、viewed people about the ways to spend the vacation and here is our report. According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Then some people like to stay at home, w

23、atching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. And to visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed. However, a few people have to work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.,美(

24、beautify),According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. However, a

25、 few people have to work. As the saying goes, “All work and no play makesJack a dull boy.” Come and enjoy your vacation. Peoplewho relax well work well.,美(beautify),,,,,,And to visit friends or parents al

26、so makes them relaxed.,Proverb（諺語(yǔ)）/saying,加諺語(yǔ)(Proverb/saying)可用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。,鍛煉對(duì)學(xué)生有好處,It is good for us students to take exercise…,As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” It is go

27、od for us students to take exercise.,集中注意力于學(xué)習(xí),We should concentrate on our studies.,As the saying goes, “No pains, no gains.” We should concentrate on our studies...,,加諺語(yǔ)(Proverb/saying)可用于開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾，多是結(jié)尾。,加諺語(yǔ)(Proverb/saying

28、)可用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。,加入英語(yǔ)俱樂(lè)部是學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的好方法,Joining the English club is a good way to learn English.,As the saying goes, “Practice makes perfect.” So joining the English club is a good way to learn English.,,加諺語(yǔ)(Pro

29、verb/saying)可用于開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾，多是結(jié)尾。,加諺語(yǔ)(Proverb/saying)可用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。,Enjoy some proverbs,1.Practice makes perfect.2.Think twice before you do. 4.Do as the Romans do.,三思而后行。,熟能生巧。,有志者事竟成。,入鄉(xiāng)隨俗。,早起的鳥(niǎo)兒有蟲(chóng)吃。,

30、失敗是成功之母。,5.The early bird catches the worm.,3.Where there is a will, there is a way.,6.Failure is the mother of success.,Enjoy some proverbs,7.It is no use crying over spilt milk.8.An apple a day keeps the doct

31、or away. 9.All roads lead to Rome.10.Never too old to learn.,覆水難收。,一天一個(gè)蘋(píng)果， 醫(yī)生遠(yuǎn)離我。,條條大路通羅馬。,活到老，學(xué)到老。,,方法四:妙用引文和例子（多用于“the body”）,Writing skills（“寫(xiě)”的技巧）,,青少年應(yīng)盡我們所能保護(hù)環(huán)境拯救地球。,We teenagers should do what we can to prot

32、ect the environment and save the earth.,For example, we can use recyclable bags instead of plastic bags, stop using napkins, plant more trees and save water and energy.,加例子,,加例子,在家里，我經(jīng)常幫助父母親干家務(wù)活。,I often help my parents

33、do housework,,such as washing dishes, folding the clothes, taking out the trash and so on.,結(jié)尾：提出倡議或號(hào)召,Let’s …Do it now ! / Don’t do it again!As students, we should start from ourselves.,Don’t wait. Join us now!Start

34、to join us now!Don’t put it off! Become a volunteer today!How amazing! I can’t wait!Save animals! Save Ourselves! Save our planet!Don’t hesitate(猶豫). It will be great fun!,,書(shū)面表達(dá)寫(xiě)作技巧,審,列,加,連,美,,,,,知己知彼，學(xué)范文,First，some

35、of us aren’t interested in English. We think studying English is such a boring thing.And then it’s so difficult for us to remember all the words in the texts. So lots of us don’t have enough confidence to keep up Eng

36、lish study. And we are always afraid to join the group discussion. What’s more, there are so many new words we haven’t met before in the passage. I don’t know what to do. Sometimes we can’t understand the main

37、idea, let alone(更不用說(shuō))answer the questions about them. But the most difficult thing is to write. We often use wrong words and sentences.,Let’s go for it!,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,Dear Mary, I heard you didn’t do wel

38、l in English. Here is some advice for you.,Yours …,________________, I think reading English every day and listening to the teach

39、er carefully in class are the most important._______, you can join the English club to practice English. You know, “Practice makes perfect.” ______________, it is necessary for you to listen to the English radio

40、every morning. It can improve your listening skill. _________, English is not difficult to learn and I hope what I have said is helpful for you.,Your turn to go for it!（試填一填）,Dear Mary, I heard you didn’t d

41、o well in English. Here is some advice for you.,Yours …,________________, I think reading English every day and listening to the

42、teacher carefully in class are the most important._______, you can join the English club to practice English. You know, “Practice makes perfect.” ______________, it is necessary for you to listen to the English r

43、adio every morning. It can improve your listening skill._________, English is not difficult to learn and I hope what I have said is helpful for you.,To begin with,Of course,In fact,Then,Your turn to go for it!（check）

44、,,,,,,,,,,,The Life as a Grade 9 Student How time flies! Now I’m in Grade Nine. Actually I feel the life is quite different from it used to be. Now I’m as busy as a bee. There’s a lot of homework and exams. The only

45、feeling I have is : The life as a Grade Nine student is very busy and challenging ! ! There’s an old saying: He who fails to plan plans to fail. I don’t want to fail, so I create a plan for the following days.Since

46、nothing is difficult if I put my heart into it, I will change my attitude towards maths and physics which I am poor at now. I’ll spend the rest time efficiently. As there’s no elevator to success, I’ll try my best to

47、 do everything step by step! I believe that I can do it!,It’s your turn! （ 請(qǐng)分析以下的文章）,Your turn to go for it!,Good words:,Good sentences:,Connection words:,隨著人口的增多，人類不僅需要越來(lái)越多的地方居住，而且需要越來(lái)越多的食物。人類把森林變成了耕地；新的城市和道路占據(jù)了動(dòng)物的棲息地；

48、許多動(dòng)物遭到獵殺······所有這些都導(dǎo)致了越來(lái)越多的動(dòng)物瀕臨滅絕。然而動(dòng)物是我們?nèi)祟惖呐笥?，我們有?zé)任去保護(hù)他們，而不是傷害或獵殺它們。 請(qǐng)根據(jù)上述內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一篇不少于80詞的英語(yǔ)短文。 要求： 1.語(yǔ)言規(guī)范、意思連貫、表達(dá)完整； 2.提示的內(nèi)容要全部用上。,It’s your turn! (練練筆),Let’s Help Our Friends W

49、ith the increasing population, human needs more places to live in and more food to eat. As a result, we change the forests into farmland. I feel pity for the animals. More and more new cities and roads are built on

50、animals’ habitat. A lot of animals are killed because of their tasty meat or beautiful fur. There used to be lots of animals, but now more and more animals become endangered because of our crazy and silly behavior. For e

51、xample, there are only 2500 manatees in the USA now. Do you want to see these gentle and shy animals disappear? Do you want our children only to see model animals in the future? Don’t you think animals are our lovely fri

52、ends? I know your answer is “No”. So it’s our duty to protect them instead of hurting or killing them. Don’t put it off！Let’s try our best to help our friends today!,Your turn to go for it!,Good words:,Good sentences

53、:,Connection words:,模板作文,開(kāi)頭公式一：名人名言 1. A proberb says/As an old saying goes,“ You are only young once.”2. As everyone knows/As is known to us, no one can deny that… 開(kāi)頭公式二：數(shù)字統(tǒng)計(jì) 1. According to a recent survey, about

54、78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation. 2. A recent statistics shows that …,附,結(jié)尾公式一：結(jié)論1. Obviously, we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and res

55、pect for others. 2. to sum up/ in conclusion/ in brief/ on account of this/ thus…結(jié)尾公式二：建議1. Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken. 2. Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.,

56、寫(xiě)作的“五項(xiàng)基本原則”,一、 長(zhǎng)短句原則 As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectualneed of mind, they are in a way quite similar. 二、 主題句原

57、則 To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam（主題句）. Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.,三、 一二三原則 1）first, second, thi

58、rd, last2）firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally3）the first, the second, the third, the last4）in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly5）to begin with, then, furthermore, finally6）t

59、o start with, next, in addition, finally7）first and foremost, besides, last but not least8）most important of all, moreover, finally 9）on the one hand, on the other hand10）for one thing, for another thing,四、 短語(yǔ)優(yōu)先原則 I

60、 cannot bear/stand it. I cannot put up with it. I want it. I am looking forward to it.,,,五、多變句式原則 I enjoy music and he is fond of playing guitar. Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is al

61、so warm. The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition. hen, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this reason, so that …This is what I can do. Whether he can go with us or not is n

62、ot sure. The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine. I don’t enjoy that book you are reading. Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going. Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or s

63、imple, there is plenty in London for you. Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean tides. We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope o