短文改錯題備考指導之一學案

1、短文改錯備考指導之一（學案）第1頁（共8頁）短文改錯題備考指導之一（學案）PartI.PartI.高考短文改錯試題設置形式：高考短文改錯試題設置形式：短文改錯（共10小題，每小題1分，滿分10分）假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（）。并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：

2、在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不記分。PartIIPartII常見錯誤：常見錯誤：1、行文邏輯2、上下文一致3、詞的搭配和詞本身的用法一、一、行文邏輯錯誤行文邏輯錯誤：語意矛盾：butcomegoluckilyunluckilyherethere語意重復：because—sothoughbutrepeatagainimprovebetteren

3、terintomarrywithinlastweekallwhattheplacewherehelivesinthegirlwhomhewkswithher主系表todoit.練習：1.1.Ilikesingingmybrotherlikesplayingfootball.2..2.DoyoulikesptsIfnotjoinourfootballteam.3.3.Unlessyouloseheartyou’llfail.4.4.Hew

4、rotetomeimmediatelyassoonashegotthere.5.5.Thoughitwascoldbuthewentout.二、二、上下文一致：上下文一致：1.1.時態(tài)一致2.2.主謂一致3.3.指代一致4.4.平行結構前后要一致5.5.名詞單復數與修飾語和上下文要一致1.1.時態(tài)一致時態(tài)一致1)1)IwouldlikeverymuchtocomebutIhadanexaminationtomrow.2)2)Heoffe

5、redmecoffeeotherdrinks.Wehaveagoodtimetogether.3)3)I’msry.Ifgettopostyourletter.2.2.主謂一致主謂一致1)1)Thestudentswatchestheteacherdoingtheexperiment.2)2)Helpinghimarewthwhile.3)3)Heaswellashisfriendsknownothingaboutit.4).4).No

6、tonlyhebutalsoIkeepsitasecret.3.3.指代一致指代一致1)1)PassRoseItwopiecesofbreadplease.2)2)Thefootballteamhasdonewellthisyear.Alloftheirmembershavetriedhard.3)3)Hedrovetoofastthepolicestoppedher.4)4)Thisistruethathediedinanaccide

7、ntyesterday.5)5)ThisisthebestfilmwhichIhaveeverseen.6)6)TheweatherinBeijingiswarmerthanitinJilin.4.4.平行結構前后要一致平行結構前后要一致1)1)Hecameinopeninghisbookbegantospeak.2)2)Shewaseatingherswichdrankhermilkatthetable.3)3)Hewantedhis

8、childrentocomeoutplayed.4)4)Themehehasthemehewants.5)5)Sittingdownhebegantowk.6)6)IliveinBeijingwhereisthecapitalofChina.總結：平行結構連接詞：butboth...not...buteither...neither...nnotonly...but(also)ratherthaninsteadof5.5.名詞單復數與修

9、飾語和上下文要一致名詞單復數與修飾語和上下文要一致1)1)只修飾可數名詞：alargegreatnumberofagoodgreatmanydozensscesofquiteafew2)2)只修飾不可數名詞：agreatdealofalargeamountofquitealittle短文改錯備考指導之一（學案）第3頁（共8頁）3.3.TomisascleverthanJohn.4.4.Therearemetreesinvillagest

10、hancities.(三)見有轉折，因果，對比等句子結構見有轉折，因果，對比等句子結構，查是否有查是否有行文邏輯錯誤行文邏輯錯誤1.1.Ilikesingingmybrotherlikesdancing.2.2.Aladycametothewindowwiththeballshoutedattheboyheranaway.3.3.ThoughIwkedhardbutIfailedtopasstheexam.(四)見有多重句，查是否有見有

11、多重句，查是否有時態(tài)語態(tài)混亂，引導詞不當，成分缺失錯誤時態(tài)語態(tài)混亂，引導詞不當，成分缺失錯誤1.1.Hesaidthatheiswritinganewnovel.2.2.Ourtaskhasfinishedsofar.3.3.Whetheryoupaythecostofsendingapostcardthelibrarianwillwritetoyou.4.4.TomasksMarkifheknowsthemanisspeakingto

12、him.(五)見有名詞，代詞，查是否有見有名詞，代詞，查是否有數、格、指代錯誤數、格、指代錯誤1.1.Differentpeoplespeakdifferentlanguage.2.2.Tombookisonthedesk.3.3.TheSmithsdidhisbesttomakemefeelathome.(六)見有并列主語，從句做主語，動名詞，不定式做主語，時間，距離，金錢等做主語，見有并列主語，從句做主語，動名詞，不定式做主語，時間

13、，距離，金錢等做主語，togethertogetherwithwith等引導的成分修飾主語時，查是否有等引導的成分修飾主語時，查是否有主謂不一致錯誤主謂不一致錯誤1.1.TomJohnisgoodstudents.2.2.Thattheearthisroundareknowntous.3.3.Whatheneedsaremoney.4.4.Whathewantsisthreebooks.5.5.Thefamilyarearichonet

14、hefamilyisveryfriendly.6Playingfootballnotonlymakesusgrowtallstrongbutalsogiveusasenseoffairplayteamspirit.7.7.Thirtydollarsareenough.8.8.SheaswellasherbrothersarefondofstudyingEnglish.(七)見有短語，詞組，查是否有見有短語，詞組，查是否有固定結構中副詞，

15、介詞或冠詞使用不當錯誤固定結構中副詞，介詞或冠詞使用不當錯誤1.1.SuddenlyIcaughtasightofmyEnglishteacherinthecrowd.2.2.Whenhecamebackhefoundsomeonehadbrokeninhishouse.3.3.Inafacthehasthreesons.4.4.Tomisseriouslyillheisinthehospitalnow.(八)見非謂語動詞，查是否有見非

16、謂語動詞，查是否有非謂語動詞使用錯誤非謂語動詞使用錯誤1.1.IenjoywatchTV.2.2.Ifheatingwatercanbechangedintosteam.3.3.Shestoodtherewaitedfhisboyfriend.(九)見有特殊動詞或句型，查是否有見有特殊動詞或句型，查是否有句子語氣錯誤句子語氣錯誤1.1.Hederedthatthewkmustbestartedatonce.2.2.Itishightim

17、ethatyougotoschool.講后練講后練：1.Twentyminutesaren’tenoughtimetofinishthistest.2.2.Tomhassenttothenearesthospital.3.3.Wheneverwecouldn’tundersthimhewillexplainfus.4.4.Theyweremadedothejobfrommningtillnight.5.5.Everymeanshaveb

18、eentriedbuthewon’tloseheartfever.6.6.Howbeautifulpicturehehasdrawn.7.7.Hewasamedicalstudentbefeheturnedawriter.8.8.Iwasveryangrybuttheywereveryangrier.9.9.ShenotonlyteachesourEnglishbutalsotakesusoutshowsusaround.10.10.I

19、willneverfgetthedayswhenwespenttogether.11.11.Hecametotellusthathehadseenthere.12.12.Ifyoucanpasstheexamdependsonhowhardyouwk.13.13.Wewerehavingclasseswhilesomeoneknockedatthedo.14.14.Iwanttofindahoteltolive.15.15.Wehave