句子潤(rùn)色用高級(jí)結(jié)構(gòu)讓句子靚起來(lái)

1、句子潤(rùn)色：,用高級(jí)結(jié)構(gòu)讓句子 靚起來(lái),,教學(xué)目標(biāo)：1.用高級(jí)結(jié)構(gòu)為作文提檔升級(jí) 2.活學(xué)活用，能夠在情境中實(shí)際 運(yùn)用所學(xué)知識(shí)。,第二節(jié)書(shū)面表達(dá)（滿(mǎn)分25分）假定你是李華，與留學(xué)生朋友Bob約好一起去書(shū)店，因故不能赴約。請(qǐng)給他寫(xiě)封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.表示歉意；2.說(shuō)明原因；3.另約時(shí)間。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。,2016年全國(guó)卷3,Dear Bob, I’m L

2、i Hua. Yesterday we agreed to go to the bookstore together on Saturday but I want to tell you that I cannot go to the bookstore with you, because I have something important. I know I should keep my promise. I am very sor

3、ry about that. I hope you can understand me. Shall we go on Sunday morning? I suggest we should start early. In this way we can have more time to read and select books. If you agree, let’s meet at 8:30 outside the sc

4、hool gate. You can also choose the time to go to the bookstore if you have a plan. I will be free any time after school next week. Yours

5、 Li Hua,整篇作文缺少高級(jí)詞匯、短語(yǔ)。句式單調(diào)，缺乏多樣性，簡(jiǎn)單句的大量運(yùn)用給人記流水賬的感覺(jué)。,遣詞造句過(guò)于平淡，敘述理由不夠真誠(chéng)，含糊不清以我為主體，沒(méi)有顧及他人的感受。,正文第一段結(jié)尾結(jié)構(gòu)松散，不夠緊湊，上下文缺乏巧妙連接，表達(dá)過(guò)于口語(yǔ)化。部分句子不符合英式表達(dá)，如＂I hope you can understand me.＂完全是漢語(yǔ)思維的產(chǎn)物。,綜上可知，語(yǔ)

6、言平淡、中式英語(yǔ)思維、上下文缺乏連貫性是制約考生取得高分的關(guān)鍵因素。,策略1：特殊句式 風(fēng)景獨(dú)好,1 使用強(qiáng)調(diào)句:用do, does, did強(qiáng)調(diào)一般時(shí)態(tài)的謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞; 用it is ...that ...強(qiáng)調(diào)謂語(yǔ)之外的各種句子成分。Those who like reading extensively say we get our knowledge through reading.,,,Those who like reading e

7、xtensively say it is through reading that we get our knowledge.,Those who like reading extensively say we do get our knowledge through reading.,舉一反三,您給了我們很多的知識(shí)和快樂(lè)！(梅二檢),,It is you who/that give us so much knowledge and h

8、appiness.,You do give us so much knowledge and happiness.,It is your unreserved(無(wú)保留的） help that enables me to obtain this splendid（極好的）opportunity of further education.,2 使用倒裝句,The library is to the east of the teac

9、hing building.,,To the east of the teaching building is the library.,只有用這種方法我們才可以學(xué)好英語(yǔ)。,,Only in this way can we learn English well.,我不僅取得了好成績(jī)，而且交到了很多好朋友。（梅一檢）,舉一反三,Not only have I obtained the excellent academic perform

10、ance, but also I have made lots of good friends,3使用虛擬語(yǔ)氣,Obviously, it’s high time for us to take some measures to solve the problem.,,Obviously, it’s high time that we took some measures to solve the problem,We have done

11、 the work well with your help.,,Without/ but for your help, We could not have done the work well with your help.,I can’t imagine what I would be like without them.,4使用with的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu):介詞with+賓語(yǔ)后接非謂語(yǔ)（動(dòng)名詞、現(xiàn)在分詞、不定式、過(guò)去分詞）、名詞、形容詞、副詞

12、并構(gòu)成邏輯上主謂關(guān)系的結(jié)構(gòu)。,with the technology developing , the human living environment has become worse and worse,,由于有個(gè)重要的會(huì)要參加，我不能和你一起去書(shū)店了。,With an important meeting to attend, I cannot go to the bookstore with you.,,5使用獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu),Wea

13、ther permitting, we will have a picnic tomorrow.,My mother being ill, I have to take care of her now.,我的媽媽生病了，我必須照顧她。,,策略2：活用非謂語(yǔ)，句句精彩,1運(yùn)用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞整合簡(jiǎn)單句，提升表達(dá)檔次,（1）I have a good command of English. (2) It makes it easy for m

14、e to communicate with native speakers of English.,,,I have a good command of English, making it easy for me to communicate with native speakers of English.,舉一反三,In this picture, a mother bird stays in her nest in a bi

15、g tree. she watches her babies flying away.,,In this picture, a mother bird stays in her nest in a big tree, watching her babies flying away.,All the people here like the novel. It is written by Tom.,,,All the people he

16、re like the novel written by Tom.,2運(yùn)用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞簡(jiǎn)化復(fù)合句，使語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練,If you want to travel around the downtown area, you’d better hire a street bike.,,Wanting to travel around the downtown area, you’d better hire a street bike.,After t

17、hey visited the lab, the visitors went to the library.,,Having visited the lab, the visitors went to the library,策略3 使用諺語(yǔ)，畫(huà)龍點(diǎn)睛,諺語(yǔ)的準(zhǔn)確使用也可以為文章增色。,策略4 運(yùn)用從句， 豐富內(nèi)涵,通過(guò)合并意義相關(guān)的幾個(gè)句子，用一定的連接方式連接起來(lái)，或通過(guò)緊湊，去掉一些多余的成分，避免冗長(zhǎng)累贅、松散無(wú)力，使句子凝

18、練，層次清晰。例如：Some students are interested in the activity. They are welcome to take part.,,,Students who are interested in the activity are welcome to take part.,背熟這10篇優(yōu)秀范文，2017高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作輕松得20+,That is owing to（因?yàn)椋?#160;the f

19、act that （同位語(yǔ)從句）my younger brother suddenly fell ill and was taken to a hospital thismorning.  (2 道歉信),Besides, the success stories of world-famous people are also attractive to me, which help me learn a lot from th

20、em.  （6建議信）,I keep wondering how you feel about your school life in Beijing. （7求助信）,第二節(jié)書(shū)面表達(dá)（滿(mǎn)分25分）假定你是李華，與留學(xué)生朋友Bob約好一起去書(shū)店，因故不能赴約。請(qǐng)給他寫(xiě)封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.表示歉意；2.說(shuō)明原因；3.另約時(shí)間。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。,2016年全國(guó)卷3,Dea

21、r Bob, I’m Li Hua. Yesterday we agreed to go to the bookstore together on Saturday but I want to tell you that I cannot go to the bookstore with you, because I have something important. I know I should keep my pro

22、mise. I am very sorry about that. I hope you can understand me. Shall we go on Sunday morning? I suggest we should start early. In this way we can have more time to read and select books. If you agree, let’s meet at

23、8:30 outside the school gate. You can also choose the time to go to the bookstore if you have a plan. I will be free any time after school next week. Yours