ets的issue36篇范文以及評分

1、ETS 官方 官方 Issue 主題范文 主題范文 36 篇以下是現(xiàn)在能夠找到的 ets 公布的所有的 issue 主題的范文。一共 6 個題目，每個題目，6 篇不同分數(shù)的范文。研讀“4-6”分作文。對于 1-3 分作文，可以看看 ets 對它的評價，分 析其分數(shù)低的原因。保證自己不要犯這些錯誤。有些錯誤是致命的。比如跑題。Isusue test1 “Both the development of technological tools

2、 and the uses to which humanity has put them have created modern civilizations in which loneliness is ever increasing.“6 Technology, broadly defined as the use of tools, has a long history. Ever since Erg the caveman

3、first conked an animal with a rock, people have been using technology. For thousands of years, the use of tools allowed people to move ever closer together. Because fields could be cultivated and the technology to st

4、ore food existed, people would live in cities rather than in small nomadic tribes. Only very lately have Erg's descendants come to question the benefits of technology. The Industrial Revolution introduced and sp

5、read technologies that mechanized many tasks. As a result of the drive toward more efficient production and distribution (so the ever larger cities would be supported), people began to act as cogs in the technological

6、 machine. Clothing was no longer produced by groups of women sewing and gossiping together, but by down-trodden automation's operating machinery in grim factories.The benefits of the new technology of today, compu

7、ters and the internet, are particularly ambiguous. They have made work ever more efficient and knit the world together in a web of information and phone lines. Some visionaries speak of a world in which Erg need not

8、check in to his office; he can just dial in from home. He won't need to go to a bar to pick up women because there are all those chat rooms. Hungry? Erg orders his groceries from an online delivery service.

9、Bored? Download a new game. And yet...Many people, myself included, are a little queasy about that vision. Erg may be doing work, but is it real work? Are his online friends real friends? Does anything count in a s

10、piritual way if it's just digital? Since the Industrial Revolution, we have been haunted by the prospect that we are turning into our machines: efficient, productive, souless. The newest technologies, we fear, a

11、re making us flat as our screens, turning us into streams of bits of interchangable data. We may know a lot of people, but we have few real friends. We have a lot of things to do, but no reason to do them. In short,

12、 the new technology emphasizes a spiritual crisis that has been building for quite some time.As I try to unravel which I believe about the relative merits of technology, I think it is instructive to remember technology

13、's original result. A better plow meant easier farming, more food, longer lives, and more free time to pursue other things such as art. Our newest technology does not give us more free time; it consumes our free

14、time. We are terminally distracted from confronting ourselves or each other. We stay safe, and lonely, in our homes and offices rather than taking the risk of meeting real people or trying new things.While I am certa

15、inly not a Luddite, I do believe we need to look for a bit more balance between technology and life. We have to tear ourselves away from the fatal distractions and go out into the world. Technology has given us long

16、lives and endless supplies of information. Now we need to apply that information, use the time we're not spending conking our dinner with a club, and find our reasons for living.評價 This outstanding response displa

17、ys cogent reasoning, insightful, persuasive analysis, and superior control of language. The essay immediately identifies the complexities of the issue and then playfully explores both the benefits and the drawbacks of

18、 technological developments over the course of human history. The writer maintains that a “balance between technology and life“ is technology, such as the cellular telephone and laptop computer, has made intellectual c

19、ontact “faster and easier“ and has benefited users by allowing them to communicate with “a larger number of people.“The response provides clear and relevant examples of the ways in which technological developments fac

20、ilitate and encourage intellectual communication. The writer examines the impact of user-friendly Internet access on the individual's ability to interact with others even when physical distance separates the comm

21、unicating parties.The organization is clear, yet transitions between paragraphs are not always smooth. The body of the essay lacks the focus that would help move it to a score of 6. It is not always clear how the inf

22、ormation given relates to the essay's initial position (e.g., the discussion of current prices for personal computers in paragraph five). The conclusion, while clearly relevant, attempts to impose order on the so

23、mewhat loosely connected paragraphs, yet fails to add substance to the analysis.On the whole, the essay displays clarity and control, but the language is sometimes imprecise and less tightly controlled than it would be

24、 in a 6 essay. The following sentence is one such example: “The motivation for the declaration that loneliness is increasing may be due to the fact that many people, especially blue-collar workers, are unable to affor

25、d or use these new devices.“4 Looking at the above statement, I see a lot of truth to the statement . There are many ways that society has used the advanced technology in order to isolate themselves. It may or may not

26、 be a consious move, but the results are all the same. The isolation occurs in a variety of ways and in all different areas. By computerizing factories, there are more and more people working long hours by themselv

27、es, with there only companion as a computer monitor. Although the company may be getting better production, the question that needs to be ask is at what cost to their employees.It is not only the management of big fac

28、tories that are responsible for this isolation. This lonliness can be seen in many other settings. With the growing popularity of the television, the nation is seeing a decline in families talking and an increase in

29、 watching the television. Not only can this result in a generation of “coach potatoes“, it is also causes less communication and a feeling of isolation from everyone that a person cares about.So far technology has ente

30、red the work place and the home, it has also entered the social relm. When you go to order food in the drive-thru, who is or better yet what is it that you talk to? It is a machine, although there is a person on the

31、other end, you are still reciting your order to a machine. If it is ten o'clock at night and you need money, there are ATM's. All of these gadgets may be very nice and convient, but they result in lack of h

32、uman contact.Although it might be easy to blame technolgy for our feelings of loneliness, it is just a cop out. By looking at all the ways technology causes isolation, it is still people who choose to use these conven

33、ient methods. If a person wants to have human contact, all they have to do is go inside to the bank or go inside the resturaunt to order. What it basically boils down to, is that it is our choice whether or not we us

34、e technology. It is a scary thought to think maybe one day we might live in a society where you will never have to leave your house. That by using FAX machines, computers, modems, and the telephone a person would ne

35、ver have to have human contact to get their job done. The thing is that if that is not what we as a society wants, we are the ones to speak out and change the outcome.評價 This response presents a competent discussion o

36、f the issue. The position presented in the first paragraph -- that “there are many ways that society has used the advanced technology in order to isolate themselves“ -- is adequately sustained, but the examples given