寫作專題-英語-新課標(biāo)-人教版-全國卷地區(qū)專用

1、新課標(biāo)(RJ)·全國卷地區(qū)專用,,課件編輯說明,本課件是由精確校對(duì)的word書稿制作的“逐字編輯”課件，如需要修改課件，請(qǐng)雙擊對(duì)應(yīng)內(nèi)容，進(jìn)入可編輯狀態(tài)。 如果有的公式雙擊后無法進(jìn)入可編輯狀態(tài)，請(qǐng)單擊選中此公式，點(diǎn)擊右鍵、“切換域代碼”，即可進(jìn)入編輯狀態(tài)。修改后再點(diǎn)擊右鍵、“切換域代碼”，即可退出編輯狀態(tài)。,專題1　應(yīng)用文寫作之建議信專題2　應(yīng)用文寫作之申請(qǐng)信專題3　應(yīng)用文寫作之投訴信專題4　應(yīng)用文寫作之邀請(qǐng)信專

2、題5　應(yīng)用文寫作之電子郵件,目 錄,寫作專題,專題6　應(yīng)用文寫作之通知專題7　應(yīng)用文寫作之倡議書專題8　應(yīng)用文寫作之演講致辭專題9　應(yīng)用文寫作之招聘啟事專題10　記敘文寫作之圖畫敘事專題11　記敘文寫作之人物介紹專題12　說明文寫作之地理介紹,目 錄,專題13　說明文寫作之圖畫、圖表說明專題14　議論文寫作之陳述觀點(diǎn)型、正反觀點(diǎn)型、說明利弊型,目 錄,專題1　應(yīng)用文寫作之建議信,返回目錄,專題1　應(yīng)用文寫作之建議信,◇ 寫

3、作點(diǎn)撥 ◇ 建議信是寫信人向收信人對(duì)某事提出的建議和忠告。建議信可能是寫給個(gè)人，也可能是寫給某個(gè)組織或機(jī)構(gòu)。信的內(nèi)容要包括寫信的原因，建議的內(nèi)容，提出建議的理由。建議信要寫得簡明扼要、目的明確、具有合理性和說服力。具體寫作步驟一般是“三段式”，通常以firstly, secondly, thirdly或to begin/start with, then, later, last but not least等依次陳述建議

4、，具體為：,返回目錄,專題1　應(yīng)用文寫作之建議信,第一段：表明寫作意圖。陳述事由，簡單介紹自己，注意語氣。 第二段：應(yīng)該首先肯定對(duì)方的優(yōu)點(diǎn)，然后再寫需要改進(jìn)的地方或針對(duì)具體情況提出具體的建議或忠告。注意千萬不要讓別人以為你是在投訴，而不是提建議。 第三段：對(duì)提出的建議進(jìn)行總結(jié)。要注意有禮貌，使讀者容易接受。,返回目錄,專題1　應(yīng)用文寫作之建議信,◇ 詞句模板 ◇1．段首常用語：(1)I am wr

5、iting to express my views concerning…(2)You have asked for my advice about…and I will try to make some suggestions.2．表達(dá)“建議”常用語：(1)I think the most suitable…for you is…(2)I would like to suggest that…(3)You'd bet

6、ter…/It's better to…(4)As far as I am concerned…/In my opinion…,返回目錄,專題1　應(yīng)用文寫作之建議信,(5)For one thing…， for another…(6)If I were you, I would…(7)It seems to me that you could…3．段尾常用語：(1)I think it would be more be

7、neficial if you could…(2)I believe you will take my advice into account/con­sideration.(3)I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions practical/useful/helpful.,返回目錄,專題1　應(yīng)用文寫作之建議信,(4)I will be more than happy

8、to see improvements in this regard.(5)I will be ready for discussing this matter into further details.4．建議信格式模板：Dear ________， I am ________．Your collection of suggestions on ________ is ________. As is known to

9、 all, ________. My suggestions are as follows：Firstly, ________．(People can ________．)Secondly，________. (To make economic profits, ________．),返回目錄,專題1　應(yīng)用文寫作之建議信,Thirdly, ________．(As many of them ________．)I hope you

10、 will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you into further details.(Or: Your kind consideration of my suggestions will be highly appreciated.) Good luck with your ________．

11、(祝愿) Yours sincerely， Li Ming,返回目錄,【活學(xué)活用】 在緊張的高三備考階段，英語老師為了提高復(fù)習(xí)效率，廣泛征

12、求學(xué)生意見。假如你叫張華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，給英語老師寫封信，表達(dá)你們的需求和建議。?適當(dāng)放慢進(jìn)度，留出思考時(shí)間?反復(fù)訓(xùn)練重要、易錯(cuò)知識(shí)點(diǎn)?指導(dǎo)方法?減少作業(yè)量以保證質(zhì)量?給予更多鼓勵(lì),返回目錄,專題1　應(yīng)用文寫作之建議信,注意：1．根據(jù)以上內(nèi)容寫一篇短文，不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫；2．要準(zhǔn)確使用語法和詞匯且使用一定的句型、詞匯，清楚、連貫地表達(dá)自己的意思；3．詞數(shù)100左右，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。D

13、ear Mr Wang, We're so pleased that you are willing to share our views.In the course of the general revision, what we need is solid foundation.___________________________________________________________________

14、_____________________,返回目錄,專題1　應(yīng)用文寫作之建議信,One possible version：Dear_Mr_Wang,_ We're_so_pleased_that_you_are_willing_to_share_our views. In the course of the general revision, what we need is solid foundatio

15、n. As you know, we didn't learn well enough in the first two years, so please slow down and make sure we have really mastered something. Besides, we need a little more time to think for ourselves. As for those import

16、ant points which also make us confused, would you please give us more practice in case we forget?,返回目錄,專題1　應(yīng)用文寫作之建議信,,Meanwhile, we need your instructions, for example, in how to write in natural English. I still have an

17、other request: assign us less homework in order that we can do it more efficiently. By the way, we often feel frustrated, which has a very bad effect on our study. We would appreciate it if you would give us some

18、encouragement from time to time. Yours， Zhang Hua,返回目錄,專題1　應(yīng)用文寫作

19、之建議信,,專題2　應(yīng)用文寫作之申請(qǐng)信,返回目錄,專題2　應(yīng)用文寫作之申請(qǐng)信,◇ 寫作點(diǎn)撥 ◇ 申請(qǐng)信有很多種，有求職申請(qǐng)信、加入某組織的申請(qǐng)信、報(bào)考申請(qǐng)信、申請(qǐng)學(xué)位或留學(xué)申請(qǐng)信等。寫申請(qǐng)信時(shí)要注意語言言簡意賅，語氣誠懇禮貌。要避免不符合事實(shí)的浮夸。如果是留學(xué)申請(qǐng)和獎(jiǎng)學(xué)金申請(qǐng)，要注意提供以下信息：寫明申請(qǐng)學(xué)校和專業(yè)，簡介個(gè)人履歷，索取對(duì)方學(xué)校相關(guān)信息，附上個(gè)人經(jīng)歷等材料。 申請(qǐng)信一般都包括這樣幾個(gè)部分

20、：申請(qǐng)的原因，具備的條件，懇請(qǐng)申請(qǐng)單位考慮自己的申請(qǐng)并表示謝意，期望回復(fù)。具體為：,返回目錄,專題2　應(yīng)用文寫作之申請(qǐng)信,第一段：說明寫信的目的，介紹自己是誰，對(duì)所申請(qǐng)職位或?qū)W位的單位或院校的了解以及自己將會(huì)為對(duì)方所做的貢獻(xiàn)，信息的來源等，這一段要寫得簡短而又能吸引收信人的注意力。 第二段：介紹自己的學(xué)歷或工作經(jīng)歷，本人的個(gè)性，已經(jīng)取得的成績，說明你為何對(duì)這一職位或?qū)W校感興趣以及你對(duì)未來的打算等。 第三段

21、：表示感謝和期待對(duì)方優(yōu)先考慮自己的申請(qǐng)，以求得面試等機(jī)會(huì)。這段尤其要注意語氣應(yīng)禮貌而又自信。,返回目錄,專題2　應(yīng)用文寫作之申請(qǐng)信,◇ 詞句模板 ◇1．說明應(yīng)聘原因常用語：(1)I learned from sb/the newspaper that your company wanted to hire…(2)I was told that…(3)I have just read in the newspaper that…

22、(4)I am writing to inquire opportunities for…2．介紹個(gè)人簡歷和優(yōu)勢常用語：(1)Now I'd like to introduce myself to you.(2)My name is….I'm…years old. I'm…cm tall.(3)I graduated from…University in 2003.,返回目錄,專題2　應(yīng)用文寫作之申請(qǐng)信,

23、(4)I like swimming，singing and dancing in my spare time.(5)I work hard and I can get along/on well with others.(6)I'm good at English and especially my spoken English is fairly good.(7)I can understand Japanese an

24、d I can talk to foreigners in Japanese freely.(8)I am currently studying…(9)I would be interested in doing sth.(10)My main specialization is…,返回目錄,專題2　應(yīng)用文寫作之申請(qǐng)信,3．表示感謝，請(qǐng)求答復(fù)并提供聯(lián)系方式常用語：(1)Thank you very much.(2)Thank

25、you for your consideration of my application.(3)If you agree with me，I'll work hard and try to be a(n)…(4)I am available for an interview…(5)I look forward to hearing from you.(6)If you agree with me，please write

26、 a letter to me or phone me. I live at…(7)My telephone number is…,返回目錄,專題2　應(yīng)用文寫作之申請(qǐng)信,4．申請(qǐng)信格式模板：Dear Sir/Madam， I write this letter to apply for the position that you have advertised in ________ (報(bào)紙名稱) of ________

27、 (廣告發(fā)布時(shí)間)． I am ________ from ________．As a(n) ________，I have been ________．Besides，I won ________ in ________．If you consider me appropriate for the job, please call me at ________．,返回目錄,專題2　應(yīng)用文寫作之申請(qǐng)信,I will appr

28、eciate it very much if you could give me an early reply./Thank you for considering my application, and I am looking forward to meeting you. Sincerel

29、y yours， Li Ming,返回目錄,【活學(xué)活用】 假設(shè)你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，高中畢業(yè)后想到美國弗吉尼亞大學(xué)(University of Virginia)計(jì)算機(jī)專業(yè)深造，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示用英語寫一封入學(xué)申請(qǐng)：1．性別，年齡，畢業(yè)學(xué)校； 2．學(xué)習(xí)情況及特長；3．申請(qǐng)入

30、學(xué)的理由；4．聯(lián)系方式：lihua93@ yahoo. com,返回目錄,專題2　應(yīng)用文寫作之申請(qǐng)信,注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3．開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。,返回目錄,專題2　應(yīng)用文寫作之申請(qǐng)信,Dear Sir or Madam，___________________________________________________________________________

31、_______________________ I look forward to your prompt reply. Sincerely yours，

32、 Li Hua,返回目錄,專題2　應(yīng)用文寫作之申請(qǐng)信,One possible version：Dear_Sir_or_Madam， I'm writing to you in the hope that I would have the chance to further my studies at your university. Firstly, please allow me

33、to briefly introduce myself. My name is Li Hua, born in 1993. I'll graduate from Xinhua High School this coming June. I'm an all­round student with excellent grades in all subjects, particularly in Internet

34、, Technology and English. This is the reason why I want to major in Computer Science in an English speaking country. I'm also good at computer program design and basketball.,返回目錄,專題2　應(yīng)用文寫作之申請(qǐng)信,,I know that the Univer

35、sity of Virginia ranks among the top universities in the USA and enjoys a good reputation all around the world. It would be a great honour for me to study at your university. My e­mail address is lihua93@ ya

36、hoo.com, and I'll appreciate it very much if I can receive your reply! I_look_forward_to_your_prompt_reply. Sincerely_yours,

37、 Li_Hua,返回目錄,專題2　應(yīng)用文寫作之申請(qǐng)信,,專題3　應(yīng)用文寫作之投訴信,返回目錄,專題3　應(yīng)用文寫作之投訴信,◇ 寫作點(diǎn)撥 ◇ 在生活中，人們經(jīng)常會(huì)遇到一些令人傷腦筋的事情，比如消費(fèi)利益受損、正常生活和工作受到干擾等，此時(shí)寫封投訴信不失為一個(gè)解決問題的辦法。 投訴信通常包括以下幾個(gè)方

38、面的內(nèi)容：說明投訴的原因并表示遺憾；實(shí)事求是地闡述問題發(fā)生的經(jīng)過，切記不要夸大其詞；指出問題引起的后果；提出批評(píng)及處理的意見或敦促對(duì)方采取措施，或者提出所希望的賠償以及補(bǔ)救方式。組織提綱時(shí)要遵循“三步走”的寫作規(guī)律：,返回目錄,專題3　應(yīng)用文寫作之投訴信,第一段：表明來信所要投訴的問題，盡可能做到客觀禮貌，給讀信人留下好印象。應(yīng)該記住讀信人不一定就是錯(cuò)誤的責(zé)任人，他的合作對(duì)事情的最終圓滿解決有著非常重要的作用。 第二段：

39、寫明投訴的原因、問題的經(jīng)過及產(chǎn)生的后果。可以說具體的理由，也可以說問題的具體體現(xiàn)方式。 第三段：提出解決方案，不需展開。這段應(yīng)體現(xiàn)書信的禮貌原則，可以用類似“如果你能……，我將十分感激”這樣的表達(dá)方式，還要注意做到公平、公正。,返回目錄,專題3　應(yīng)用文寫作之投訴信,◇ 詞句模板 ◇1．段首常用語：(1)I am writing to make a complaint about…(2)I am most reluc

40、tant to complain，but…(3)One annoying aspect of your service is…(4)I have been pleased with your services for years，but now I feel very disappointed.(5)I would like to draw your attention to the problem/fault…(6)I am

41、writing to inform you that I find…unsatisfactory.(7)I wish to express my dissatisfaction/disappointment about…,返回目錄,專題3　應(yīng)用文寫作之投訴信,2．段尾常用語：(1)It would be highly appreciated if you could…(2)I believe you will take my co

42、mplaints seriously and…(3)I hope you will give due attention to this matter.(4)I would like to get this matter settled by the end of this month.(5)I could not be more satisfied if you can kindly…(6)I would appreciate

43、 it very much if you could…,返回目錄,專題3　應(yīng)用文寫作之投訴信,3．投訴信格式模板：Dear ________， I am ________ (自我介紹). I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about ________(抱怨的事情)． The reason f

44、or my dissatisfaction is ________(總體介紹). In the first place, ________ (抱怨的第一個(gè)方面). In addition, ________(抱怨的第二個(gè)方面). Under these circumstances, I find it ________(感覺) to ________(抱怨的方面帶來的后果)．,返回目錄,專題3　應(yīng)用文寫作之投訴信,I appreciat

45、e it very much if you could ________(提出建議和請(qǐng)求), preferably ________(進(jìn)一步的要求), and I would like to have this matter settled by ________(設(shè)定解決事情的最后期限)． Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to y

46、our reply. Yours sincerely， Li Ming,返回目錄,【活學(xué)活用】 假設(shè)你是李華，最近跟父母去國外旅行時(shí)所居住

47、的旅館服務(wù)不好。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示給旅館老板寫一封英文投訴信，信中應(yīng)包括下列內(nèi)容：1. 空調(diào)不能正常運(yùn)行；2. 浴室不干凈；3. 晚上周圍噪聲很大，且不給更換房間；4. 服務(wù)員態(tài)度隨意，漫不經(jīng)心。,返回目錄,專題3　應(yīng)用文寫作之投訴信,,注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；2. 短文須包括所給要點(diǎn)，但不必逐句翻譯；3. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；4. 文章的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Sir or Mad

48、am， I am writing to complain about your hotel service. My parents and I had a terrible stay in Room 512._________________________________________________ 　 Looking forward to hearing from you.

49、 Yours faithfully, Li Hua,返回目錄,專題3　應(yīng)用文寫作之投訴信,One possible version： Dear_Sir_or_Madam，

50、 I am writing to complain about your hotel service. My parents and I had a terrible stay in Room 512. Firstly, the air conditioner wouldn't work. When I asked the staff for help, they said OK. But eventually

51、 no one came. Secondly, I found the bathroom rather dirty to bathe in. What was worse, the noise outside at night was so loud that we found it hard to fall asleep. I asked to change rooms, but was refused for the reason

52、that the hotel was full. It was surprising that the waiters treated us in a very casual and indifferent manner.,返回目錄,專題3　應(yīng)用文寫作之投訴信,,I would like you to refund my money. Unless I get a satisfactory reply, I'll write t

53、o the Consumer Association. Looking_forward_to_hearing_from_you. Yours_faithfully,

54、 Li_Hua,返回目錄,專題3　應(yīng)用文寫作之投訴信,,專題4　應(yīng)用文寫作之邀請(qǐng)信,返回目錄,專題4　應(yīng)用文寫作之邀請(qǐng)信,◇ 寫作點(diǎn)撥 ◇ 邀請(qǐng)信是寫信人對(duì)收信人的一種盛情邀約，一般分為正式和非正式兩種，格式與其他信函相同。具體寫作步驟如下： 第一段：說明與收信人的相關(guān)性與寫作意圖。 第二段：具體交代情景：包括受邀請(qǐng)的人、邀請(qǐng)朋友要干什么、地點(diǎn)以及具體的時(shí)間等內(nèi)容，并且強(qiáng)調(diào)為什

55、么邀請(qǐng)收信人而不是別的朋友。,返回目錄,專題4　應(yīng)用文寫作之邀請(qǐng)信,第三段：表示期待收信人的回復(fù)。 就本質(zhì)而言正式與非正式邀請(qǐng)信并沒有什么區(qū)別，只是正式邀請(qǐng)信比較注意文采，而且往往需要表現(xiàn)出更加誠懇的態(tài)度。邀請(qǐng)信一般都要求考生邀約朋友參加特殊聚會(huì)，共度假期，或者訪問自己的家鄉(xiāng)等，考生可以采用非正式文體。,返回目錄,專題4　應(yīng)用文寫作之邀請(qǐng)信,◇ 詞句模板 ◇1．段首常用語：(1)I am writing to inv

56、ite you to…(2)I think it would be a great idea if you could participate in…(3)I wonder if you can come…(4)How would you like to join us in…？,返回目錄,專題4　應(yīng)用文寫作之邀請(qǐng)信,2．段尾常用語：(1)Would you please drop me a line to let me kno

57、w if you can come to…？(2)My family and I would feel much honoured if you could come.(3)We would be looking forward to your coming with great pleasure.(4)I would like to meet you there and please let me know your decis

58、ion soon.,返回目錄,專題4　應(yīng)用文寫作之邀請(qǐng)信,3．邀請(qǐng)信格式模板：Dear ________， How is everything with you? I am writing to tell you that there will be a(n) ________(內(nèi)容) at/in ________(地點(diǎn)) on ________(時(shí)間). We would be honoured to have you

59、there with us. The occasion will start at ________(具體時(shí)間). This will be followed by a(n) ________(進(jìn)一步的安排)．At around ________(時(shí)間), ________(另一個(gè)安排)．,返回目錄,專題4　應(yīng)用文寫作之邀請(qǐng)信,Ring me up and tell me whether you will come or no

60、t, will you? I really hope you can make it. My phone number is ________． Looking forward to ________． Yours sincerely，

61、 Li Ming,返回目錄,【活學(xué)活用】 假設(shè)你是李華，暑假通常你會(huì)和Lisa一起去度假。今年你們打算邀請(qǐng)?jiān)诒本W(xué)習(xí)的美國朋友Ben和你們?nèi)ズＤ先齺喍燃佟Ｕ?qǐng)根據(jù)下面的要點(diǎn)寫一封e­mail向Ben發(fā)出邀請(qǐng)。要點(diǎn)：1．海南三亞度假兩周；2．參加一周的潛水課程；3．周四之前回復(fù)是否加入；4．Lisa負(fù)責(zé)預(yù)訂航班

62、和酒店。,返回目錄,專題4　應(yīng)用文寫作之邀請(qǐng)信,,注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3．信的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好(不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。Dear Ben， Time goes fast. Another summer is coming again.________________________________________________________________________

63、__________________________ Yours， Li Hua,返回目錄,專題4　應(yīng)用

64、文寫作之邀請(qǐng)信,One possible version：Dear_Ben, Time_goes_fast.Another_summer_is_coming_again. Lisa and I will go on vacation as usual. We always want to go to Sanya in Hainan Province and have planned to spend two w

65、eeks there. We would be delighted if you could join us on this trip. The first week we will take a diving course. If you want to participate then I need you to reply by Thursday. Just imagine swimming under water with th

66、e fishes! I can't wait! Don't worry about the details, as Lisa will take care of booking the plane tickets and reserving the hotel.,返回目錄,專題4　應(yīng)用文寫作之邀請(qǐng)信,,We hope you decide to come along. It will be wonderful to se

67、e you again and we will have a great time. Yours， Li_Hu

68、a,返回目錄,專題4　應(yīng)用文寫作之邀請(qǐng)信,,專題5　應(yīng)用文寫作之電子郵件,返回目錄,專題5　應(yīng)用文寫作之電子郵件,◇ 寫作點(diǎn)撥 ◇ 1．標(biāo)題欄 這是英文書信中沒有的。標(biāo)題欄中有“收件人”、“抄送”和“主題”三個(gè)框。在“收件人”框中填寫收件人的e­mail地址。如要將郵件同時(shí)發(fā)送給多人，可在“抄送”框中填入其他人的e­mail地址。在“主題”框中簡要地概括郵件的內(nèi)容，可以用一個(gè)單詞，如：

69、Greetings(問候)；也可以用短語，如：Personal information(個(gè)人情況)；還可以是一個(gè)內(nèi)容完整但語言簡短的句子。,返回目錄,專題5　應(yīng)用文寫作之電子郵件,2．稱呼語 如果是同學(xué)或親朋好友間的郵件，可以直呼其名，如：Mike；但如果是發(fā)給老師、長輩或上級(jí)，最好在稱呼前加上稱謂或職位。職位可用Doctor，Professor等，如：Professor Li。男性用Mr；女性用Miss(未婚)，Mrs