浙江英語新題型讀后續(xù)寫與概要寫作練習及答案

1、寫作是四項語文技能中不可分割的一個重要部分，更是語言生成能力的重要表現形式。該部分要求考生考生根據題示進行書面表達?？忌鷳埽?1)準確使用語法和詞匯語言的準確性是寫作中不可忽視的一個重要方面，因為它直接或間接地影響到信息的準確傳輸。應用語法結構和詞匯的準確程度是寫作部分評分標準中的一項重要內容。(2)使用一定的句型、詞匯，清楚、連貫地表達自己的意思任何一篇文章都需要有一個主題作者應該圍繞該主題，借助一些句型、詞組等的支持，清楚、連貫地

2、表達自己的思想。浙江卷寫作第二節(jié)，讀后續(xù)寫或概要寫作，兩種形式在不同考次不定期交替使用。讀后續(xù)寫。寫。提供一段350詞以內的語言材料，要求考生依據該材料內容、所給段落開頭語和所標示關鍵詞進行續(xù)寫（150詞左右），將其發(fā)展成一篇與給定材料有邏輯銜接、情節(jié)和結構完整的短文。閱卷時將主要考慮以下內容：1.與所給短文及段落開頭語的銜接程度；2.內容的豐富性和對所給關鍵詞語的覆蓋情況；3.應用語法結構和詞匯的豐富性和準確性；4.上下文的連貫性。概

3、要寫作。概要寫作。提供一篇350詞以內的短文，要求考生基于該短文寫出一篇60詞左右的內容概要。閱卷時主要考慮以下內容：1.對原文要點的理解和呈現情況；2.應用語法結構和詞匯的準確性；3.上下文的連貫性；4.對各要點表達的獨立性情況。樣題樣題第二節(jié):讀后續(xù)寫（滿分25分）閱讀下面短文，根據所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫，使之構成一個完整的故事。AfunnythinghappenedtoArthurwhenhewasonthewaytowkoneday.

4、AshewalkedalongParkAvenueneartheFirstNationalBankheheardthesoundofsomeonetryingtostartacar.Hetriedagainagainbutcouldn’tgetthecarmoving.Arthurturnedlookedinsideatthefaceofayoungmanwholookedwried.Arthurstoppedasked“Itlooks

5、likeyou’vegotaproblem”Arthursaid.“I’mafraidso.I’minabighurryIcan’tstartmycar.”“IstheresomethingIcandotohelp”Arthurasked.Theyoungmanlookedatthetwosuitcasesinthebackseatthensaid，”Thanks.Ifyou’resureitwouldn’tbetoomuchtroub

6、le，youcouldhelpmegetthesesuitcasesintoataxi.”“Notroubleatall.I’dbegladtohelp.”Theyoungmangotouttookoneofthesuitcasesfromthebackseat.Afterplacingitonthegroundheturnedtogettheotherone.JustasArthurpickedupthefirstsuitcasest

7、artedwalkingheheardthelougnoiseofanalarm.Itwasfromthebank.Therehadbeenarobbery(搶劫)!ParkAvenuehadbeenquietamomentbefe.Nowtheairwasfilledwiththesoundofthealarmtheshoutsofpeoplerunningfromalldirections.Carsstoppedthepasseng

8、ersjoinedthecrowdinfrontofthebank.Peopleaskedeachother“Whathappened？”Buteveryonehadadifferentanswer.第二節(jié):概要寫作（滿分25分）閱讀下面短文根據其內容寫一篇60詞左右的內容概要。Gettingridofdirtintheopinionofmostpeopleisagoodthing.Howeverthereisnothingfixeda

9、boutattitudestodirt.Intheearly16thcenturypeoplethoughtthatdirtontheskinwasameanstoblockoutdiseaseasmedicalopinionhaditthatwashingoffdirtwithhotwatercouldopenuptheskinletillsin.Aparticulardangerwasthoughttolieinpublicbath

10、s.By1538theFrenchkinghadclosedthebathhousesinhiskingdom.SodidthekingofEnglin1546.ThusbeganalongtimewhentherichthepoinEuropelivedwithdirtinafriendlyway.HenryIVKingofFrancewasfamouslydirty.Uponlearningthatanoblemanhadtaken

11、abaththekingderedthattoavoidtheattackofdiseasethenoblemanshouldnotgoout.Thoughthebeliefinthemerit(好處）ofdirtwaslonglived，dirthasnolongerbeenregardedasaniceneighbeversincethe18century.Scientificallyspeakingcleaningawaydirt

12、isgoodtohealth.Cleanwatersupplyhwashingarepracticalmeansofpreventingdisease.YetitseemsthatstardsofcleanlinesshavemovedbeyondsciencesinceWldWarII.Advertisementsrepeatedlyselltheidea：clothesneedtobewhiterthanwhiteclothseve

13、rsoftersurfacestoshine.HasthehatefdirthowevergonetoofarAttitudestodirtstilldifferhugelynowadays.Manyfirsttimeparentsnervouslytrytowarntheirchildrenofftouchingdirtwhichmightberesponsiblefthespreadofdisease.OnthecontraryMa

14、ryRuebush，Americanimmunologist(免疫學家），encourageschildrentoplayinthedirttobuildupastrongimmunesystem.thelatter(后者）positionisgainingsomeground.參選答案：答案：Onepossibleversion：Peoplehavemixedopinionstowardsdirtonourskin.(要點1)Falo

15、ngtimeinhistypeopleofsomeEuropeancountriessuchasFrancebelievedthatdirtprotectedpeoplefromgettingill.(要點2)Howeverpeoplebegantochangetheirattitudestodirtabout200yearsago.Peoplehavebeentoldthatwashingdirtoffourbodycankeepus

16、healthy.(要點3)Howeversomescientistsbelievethatexposuretosomedirtmayhelpourimmunesystem.(要點4)評分原則：1.本題總分為25分，按5個檔次給分。2.評分時，先根據所寫概要的內容和語言初步確定其所屬檔次，然后以該檔次的要求來衡量、確定或調整檔次，最后紿分。3.詞敗少于40的和多于80的，從總分中減去2分。4.評分時，應主要從以下四個方面考慮：(1)對原文