高三一輪復(fù)習(xí)話題寫作四---感謝信

1、高三一輪復(fù)習(xí)話題寫作四 感謝信出題人 袁兵艷 審題人 鄧翠煥寫作五步走： 1. 審題-----忌跑題 2. 列提綱/要點----忌漏點 3. 造句-----句型結(jié)構(gòu)成分要完整,忌表達單一, 忌冗言或逐句硬譯，字詞堆砌 4. 連句成文------添加過渡詞, 忌句子松散 5. 檢查---查主謂、查搭配、查拼寫感謝信：是用于致謝他人的饋贈、款待、幫助、以及對慰問信和祝賀信的回復(fù)。【感謝信三要素】1. 提出感謝，

2、感謝原因（別人做了什么事讓你感謝） ；2. 細述并贊賞對方給予的幫助；3. 再次感謝，如何回報（好好學(xué)習(xí)，繼續(xù)努力等）【感謝信注意事項】 靈活把握時態(tài)：通常，在提到對方曾給予幫助時，用過去時態(tài) 過去時態(tài)；在提到對方的幫助所產(chǎn)生的實際效果時，可用現(xiàn)在完成時 現(xiàn)在完成時；涉及到現(xiàn)狀，可用一般現(xiàn)在時 一般現(xiàn)在時；在表達祝愿或希望時，可用將來時 將來時。常用詞匯和寫作模式動詞 thank, appreciate; owe(欠債，感激)名詞 t

3、hanks, gratitude, appreciation;形容詞 thankful, grateful, appreciative第一段：表達感謝之情并說明原因1. I am writing to express my sincere thanks (to you) for…2. I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude (to you) for3. I would like to co

4、nvey in this letter my heartfelt(衷心的)thanks to you for…4. I would like to take this opportunity to express my great appreciation for your timely support and assistance.第二段：細述并贊賞對方給予的幫助1. It was nice/kind/thoughtful of yo

5、u to….2. Thank you very much for your kind hospitality(好客) and the honor you showed me during my visit…3. It was your kind help that….（強調(diào)句）4. But for/Without your help, I wouldn’t/couldn’t have done…（含蓄虛擬）5. If it had no

6、t been for your help/assistance, I wouldn't/couldn’t have…（虛擬語氣）第三段：再次感謝，如何回報。1. Thanks again for your generous help.2. I appreciate it more than I can say.3. Please accept my sincere thanks for your help, which I wi

7、ll never forget.句式操練1. 我寫這封信是為了表達我對你幫我提高英語口語的謝意，你的幫助對我而言意義重大。2. 你太好了，假期照顧我弟弟。3. 正是你的善良和熱心幫助我克服了我的思鄉(xiāng)之情。(強調(diào)句/虛擬語氣)請?zhí)暨x三個優(yōu)美句型以感謝信為話題造句。1. ______________________________________________________________________________2. _____

8、_________________________________________________________________________3. ______________________________________________________________________________在空格內(nèi)填入適當(dāng)?shù)脑~句。假如你是一名失學(xué)兒童，名叫李華，你有幸得到在中國工作的 Mr. Brown 的資助，可以重返校園。你給 Mr

9、. Brown 寫了一封信，內(nèi)容如下：★ 收到錢和書后能重返校園，非常感激；★ 在老師的幫助下，學(xué)習(xí)有了很大的進步，受到老師的表揚和鼓勵；★ 決心更加努力學(xué)習(xí)，取得更大的進步；★ 盼望見到 Mr. Brown，希望他寄來一張照片。注意：1. 書信應(yīng)包括以上所有要點，可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；2. 詞數(shù)：100 左右Dear Mr. Brown，I am writing to _____________________________

10、__ (表達我最深的謝意) the money and books you sent me. I __________________________________________ (我不可能重返校園) without your help. Thank you so much. I ______________________ (一直努力學(xué)習(xí)) since I went back to school. I _____________

11、____________________ (我已經(jīng)取得很大的進步) my studies with the help of my teachers. They often praise me and encourage me. ______________________ (要不是你的幫助), I might have left school and _________________________________ (不可能獲得這樣好

12、的教育). I have made up my mind to ___________________________________________ (更加勤奮并取得更大進步).How are you getting on with your life and work? I would like to meet you __________ (親自), but I ______________________ (沒有機會) do s

13、o. Would you please send me a photo of yourself?________________________________________ (再次感謝你慷慨的幫助) and best wishes!Yours sincerely,Li Hua鞏固與提高假如你是李華，暑假你參加了澳大利亞游學(xué)活動，回國后給 host family 寫一封信表示感謝。要點如下：1. 感謝他們一家的照顧；2. 分享游學(xué)體會