26現(xiàn)象分析英語(yǔ)作文

1、26.現(xiàn)象分析,文體概述 現(xiàn)象分析的文章屬于說(shuō)明文，一般先指出某地存在某種現(xiàn)象，然后說(shuō)明這種現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的原因，最后提出建議或呼吁杜絕這種現(xiàn)象。通常用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。,常用語(yǔ)塊引起某人的注意 ______________________ ________________________________________2. 采取措施(做……) ______________________3. 日益嚴(yán)重的問(wèn)題

2、 ______________________4. 普遍現(xiàn)象 ______________________5. 改善這種情況 ______________________,improve the situation,draw/arouse one’s attention / be brought to one’s atten

3、tion,take measures (to do…),an increasingly serious problem,a common phenomenon,6. 全社會(huì) _______________________7. 安全意識(shí) _______________________8. 有效的辦法/途徑 _______________________9. 越來(lái)越多的

4、…… _______________________10. 共同關(guān)注 _______________________,a common concern,the whole society,safety awareness,an effective approach,an increasing number of…,11. 熱點(diǎn)話題 _____________________

5、12. 人們普遍認(rèn)為 _____________________ 13. 社會(huì)發(fā)展的必然結(jié)果 ____________________________14. 隨著經(jīng)濟(jì)的快速發(fā)展 ___________________

6、_________ 15. 面臨新的機(jī)遇和挑戰(zhàn) ____________________________,be faced with new opportunities and challenges,a hot topic,It is commonly believed/recognized that…,the inevit

7、able result of social development,with the rapid development of economy,套用句式隨著工業(yè)的發(fā)展，城市的空氣質(zhì)量變得越來(lái)越差。2. 近期校車(chē)安全問(wèn)題成為了一個(gè)日益嚴(yán)重的問(wèn)題。,1. With the rapid development of industry, the air quality in cities is becoming worse and

8、worse.,2. Recently the safety of school buses has become an increasingly serious problem.,3. 如今高中生在網(wǎng)上開(kāi)通博客成為了一種普遍現(xiàn)象。4. 結(jié)果，這種現(xiàn)象引起了社會(huì)的關(guān)注。5. 有三方面的主要因素應(yīng)該引起我們的關(guān)注。,3. It is a common phenomenon that high school students

9、open their blogs on the Internet.,5. There are three main factors that should call our concern.,4. As a result, the phenomenon has aroused social attention.,習(xí)作修改(做短文改錯(cuò)，背經(jīng)典范文) Recently the safety of school buses has

10、 become a seriously problem, that has attracted more and more public attention. So in our class we have held an heated discussion on the causes and solution. After the discuss, we find that the problem caused by th

11、ree kinds of reasons which include overloading, speeding as well as weak safety awareness.,,,,,serious,which,a,solutions,,discussion,As by the solutions, first of all, we all think that it necessary to examine the safe

12、ty of the school buses. Beside, we should stop risky buses from being operated. Only if all people attach importance to safety education to raise safety awareness can traffic accidents decreased.,,for,,,,Besides,decr

13、ease,1. seriously →serious修飾名詞要用形容詞形式。2. that →which非限制性定語(yǔ)從句不能用that引導(dǎo)。3. an →a冠詞后面的heated并非以元音音素開(kāi)頭。4. solution →solutions solution是可數(shù)名詞，要和causes保持一致。5. discuss →discussion定冠詞the后面接名詞。,6. 在problem后加is分析句子成分可知，此處caused

14、作謂語(yǔ)，故要考慮時(shí)態(tài)和語(yǔ)態(tài)。時(shí)態(tài)準(zhǔn)確，但語(yǔ)態(tài)應(yīng)該用被動(dòng)才符合邏輯。7. by →for固定搭配as for意為“至于/關(guān)于”。8. 去掉think后的that此處并非引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句，而是it作形式賓語(yǔ)，后面的不定式短語(yǔ)才是真正的賓語(yǔ)。9. Beside →Besides beside意為“在……旁邊”，不符合文意。besides意為“此外”，符合文意。10. decreased →decrease情態(tài)動(dòng)詞后接動(dòng)詞原形。,課堂練習(xí)

15、 隨著經(jīng)濟(jì)的發(fā)展，人們的生活水平日益提高，一些中學(xué)生的消費(fèi)問(wèn)題成了一個(gè)熱門(mén)話題。他們花錢(qián)大手大腳，令學(xué)校難以管理。請(qǐng)寫(xiě)一篇短文對(duì)這種現(xiàn)象進(jìn)行分析。要點(diǎn)如下：1. 存在的現(xiàn)象。2. 引起此現(xiàn)象的原因。3. 你的呼吁。注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右。2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。,Today, it’s a common phenomenon that some middle school students are e

16、xtremely lavish in spending money, which has aroused wide concern. Generally, there’re several factors contributing to the phenomenon. First, with the improvement of people’s living standard, middle school students,

17、 the treasure of their parents, can get lots of pocket money from their parents. Second, some students spend less on their regular meals and necessities to save their pocket money, with which they buy snacks, cellphones,

18、 fashionable clothes, etc.,Third, young as they are, they learn to blindly worship those with much pocket money, which causes them to compare with each other on something unrealistic. To help the students, I call on

19、 schools and parents to take measures to cultivate the students’ correct value of consuming.,課外作業(yè)每年高考后，高考狀元被“熱炒”。他們被各種采訪和社會(huì)活動(dòng)所包圍，甚至可以得到大筆獎(jiǎng)金。請(qǐng)寫(xiě)一篇短文對(duì)這種現(xiàn)象進(jìn)行分析。要點(diǎn)如下：1. 存在的現(xiàn)象。2. 引起此現(xiàn)象的原因。3. 你的建議。注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右。2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)

20、節(jié)，以使行文連貫。,Every year after the College Entrance Exam, the top scorers will attract wide attention from across the country. They accept various interviews, participate in different social activities and even gain lots of

21、prize money. Generally, there’re several reasons why top scorers are worshiped and popular. First, many people are affected by the Chinese traditional thoughts, thinking that top scorers will often have a bright fu

22、ture.,Second, average students think that top scorers are good learners, from whom they can absolutely learn a lot. Third, parents want their children to imitate the top scorers. In my opinion, it’s all right to give