從審稿人意見(jiàn)看中國(guó)學(xué)者英語(yǔ)論文中出現(xiàn)的問(wèn)題

1、從審稿人意見(jiàn)看中國(guó)學(xué)者英語(yǔ)論文中出現(xiàn)的問(wèn)題以下12點(diǎn)內(nèi)容是老師和我從收集的審稿人意見(jiàn)中總結(jié)出來(lái)的，希望能對(duì)大家的寫(xiě)作有所幫助，也希望大家能給與支持。其中的錯(cuò)誤，請(qǐng)各位大牛不吝賜教。以下12點(diǎn)是隨機(jī)排序，無(wú)輕重主次之分。每一點(diǎn)內(nèi)容由總結(jié)性標(biāo)題和代表性審稿人意見(jiàn)構(gòu)成。1、目標(biāo)和結(jié)果不清晰。ItisnotedthatyourmanuneedscarefuleditingbysomeonewithexpertiseintechnicalEngl

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4、idnotshowifthesideeffectsfrominitialcopperburstcanbeavoidwiththepolymerfmulation.5、對(duì)hypothesis的清晰界定：Ahypothesisneedstobepresented6、對(duì)某個(gè)概念或工具使用的rationale定義概念：WhatwastherationalefthefilmSBFvolumeratio7、對(duì)研究問(wèn)題的定義：Trytosetthep

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9、marspellingsentencestructuresothatthegoalsresultsofthestudyarecleartothereader.◆Theauthsmusthavetheirwkreviewedbyapropertranslationreviewingservicebefesubmissiononlythencanaproperreviewbeperfmed.Mostsentencescontaingramm

10、aticalspellingmistakesarenotcompletesentences.◆Aspresentedthewritingisnotacceptablefthejournal.Thereareproblemswithsentencestructureverbtenseclauseconstruction.◆TheEnglishofyourmanumustbeimprovedbeferesubmission.Westrong

11、lysuggestthatyouobtainassistancefromacolleaguewhoiswellversedinEnglishwhosenativelanguageisEnglish.◆PleasehavesomeonecompetentintheEnglishlanguagethesubjectmatterofyourpapergooverthepapercrectit.◆thequalityofEnglishneeds

12、improving.Encouragementfromreviewers:◆Iwouldbeverygladtorereviewthepaperingreaterdepthonceithasbeeneditedbecausethesubjectisinteresting.◆Thereiscontinuedinterestinyourmanutitled“……“whichyousubmittedtotheJournalofBiomedic