從審稿人意見看中國學(xué)者英語論文中出現(xiàn)的問題

1、從審稿人意見看中國學(xué)者英語論文中出現(xiàn)的問題以下12點內(nèi)容是老師和我從收集的審稿人意見中總結(jié)出來的，希望能對大家的寫作有所幫助，也希望大家能給與支持。其中的錯誤，請各位大牛不吝賜教。以下12點是隨機排序，無輕重主次之分。每一點內(nèi)容由總結(jié)性標(biāo)題和代表性審稿人意見構(gòu)成。1、目標(biāo)和結(jié)果不清晰。ItisnotedthatyourmanuneedscarefuleditingbysomeonewithexpertiseintechnicalEngl

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5、roblemdiscussedinthispaperinmeclearwriteonesectiontodefinetheproblem8、如何凸現(xiàn)原創(chuàng)性以及如何充分地寫literaturereview:Thetopicisnovelbuttheapplicationproposedisnotsonovel.9、對claim如A＞B的證明，verification:Thereisnoexperimentalcomparisonofthe

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8、ivenunderthe“InstructionsFms“buttoninheupperrighthcnerofthescreen.12、語言問題（出現(xiàn)最多的問題）：有關(guān)語言的審稿人意見：◆ItisnotedthatyourmanuneedscarefuleditingbysomeonewithexpertiseintechnicalEnglisheditingpayingparticularattentiontoEnglishgram

9、marspellingsentencestructuresothatthegoalsresultsofthestudyarecleartothereader.◆Theauthsmusthavetheirwkreviewedbyapropertranslationreviewingservicebefesubmissiononlythencanaproperreviewbeperfmed.Mostsentencescontaingramm

10、aticalspellingmistakesarenotcompletesentences.◆Aspresentedthewritingisnotacceptablefthejournal.Thereareproblemswithsentencestructureverbtenseclauseconstruction.◆TheEnglishofyourmanumustbeimprovedbeferesubmission.Westrong

11、lysuggestthatyouobtainassistancefromacolleaguewhoiswellversedinEnglishwhosenativelanguageisEnglish.◆PleasehavesomeonecompetentintheEnglishlanguagethesubjectmatterofyourpapergooverthepapercrectit.◆thequalityofEnglishneeds

12、improving.Encouragementfromreviewers:◆Iwouldbeverygladtorereviewthepaperingreaterdepthonceithasbeeneditedbecausethesubjectisinteresting.◆Thereiscontinuedinterestinyourmanutitled“……“whichyousubmittedtotheJournalofBiomedic